
fantasy winners
So, Lyds is quite tired, so she'll be PM-ing your stickers shortly! It'd be very helpful if you could message her, Jells_, with the genre and place that you won. Thank you! Also, please make sure to thank the judges. Even though some didn't submit, the one's who did really saved her a lot of time. Finally, Merry Christmas to you all!! - Mareah
Judges:
Circle_Dreams
Gossiplanet
Jells_
In first place is Amethyst: Inception by booklored with a score of 54/60!
Review: the premise of the story is extremely interesting! i adore your descriptions to pieces. from the very first line, i was drawn into your world. i like how you were able to sprinkle in detail in the beginning without it being a total info dump, although some parts did end up being a bit like one. while i'm writing this, i'm very tired, so i cannot currently come up with specific constructive criticism. as i only had three chapters to go off of, i also don't understand your world too well, but i'm sure as i continue to read, i'll begin to understand more about evimeria and zeke/elijah's relationship. you did an amazing job on character development and showing first elijah's emotions towards zeke and then leading up to the actual event, which shows that what happened is more of a gray area. overall, i enjoyed your story, and i hope to read more later! – lyds
In second place is The Dreamcatcher and the Conjurer by heuristic_hashmath with a score of 53/60!
Review: This book is magnificent not only because of the never-read-before storyline. I would suggest every fantasy addicted reader give it a try. Your vocabulary is so good and the way you have poured every emotion into each paragraph could be felt directly. This shows your dedication towards writing. You just need a little with the punctuations and the dialogue tags. The book cover can also be changed as I find this one a little too dull for the great story. Otherwise, your story is superb. - Gossiplanet
In third place is The Mission by kavyaagnihotri with a score of 52.5/60!
Review:
Title: I don't really find the title that appealing since the genre is fantasy but also I think the title suits the storyline well.
Cover: Not really a pro with graphic designs but the cover is eye-catching, the fonts are good. What I like most about the cover is that you can just tell what the story is about.
Summary: It's not too bulky if excluded the tags and awards thing. Like how it shows what to expect in the story.
Grammar: there is only some minor mistakes but overall, the grammar is good and readable.
Plot & Character Development: This is what I like most about the book. The character and plot are really intertwined. The personality of the female character changes along with the plot. In her office, she gives off a good professional vibe with her cold side and her being considerate towards her employees and as the story moves on it shows her vulnerability and her fears.
Congrats to all the winners! And again, Merry Christmas! I hope you all have a lovely rest of the year. :)
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