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' just like magic '

order for ash !

pls note - these are just my person opinions ! ur account is as gorgeous and fabulous as u <3

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username ! -fandxm-lxver

the hyphens and the ' x ' s are so cute and aesthetic !

i think it would also look good with another hyphen at the end, tho idk if thats taken or not... smth like ' -fandxm-lxver- ' :)

9/10

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title !

font is so cute ! <3

the double name is a little confusing, but i honestly cant judge bc there was a time where i went by quill but ppl called me squish and now there's still some ppl who call me quill even tho i go by squish and its just confusing lol :')

maybe add a cute symbol or smth ? otherwise i love it <3

7/10

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profile picture !

i love faceclaim pfps tho im gonna be honest i have no idea who the person in ur pfp is ! the border is a little thin and shaky, almost ?? like it appears around some parts of the pic but sorta fades at other parts. i would recommend either making the border thicker or taking it out altogether :)

that being said, i love how well it matches the theme ! <3

7/10

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banner !

my only critique is that the color is a little dark and matches the pfp background a little too well imo... just makes it a tiny bit hard to see where the pfp starts/finishes. maybe lighten the banner color or make a thicker pfp border ??

but other than that, its perfect <3 yk how much i love single color banners :)

8/10

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book covers !

i specifically love the covers for ' im broken ' , ' falling ' , and ' lights ' !

the only thing is they do lack cohesion :( the last three are rly bright and colorful while the other four are darker, some have faceclaims while others have words, etc. obv thats not a huge problem ( especially bc ur writing is amazing ! ) but its not as visually satisfying to look at <3

5/10

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reading lists !

none so i cant rate :) 

nothing wrong w that ofc, but reading lists are a great way to keep track of books on wp ! u can also add different fonts / symbols so they tie into ur theme <3

0/0

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bio !

love the font ! its super well organized which i also appreciate, and im on ur friends list ! ahh ilysm oml <3

ok the only thing that bothers me is the third section is a different font from the rest of the sections ? idk if thats intentional or not but its prob just me being rly picky sakfjlsdfl

maybe add some symbols too if u want !

8/10

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link !

link leads to a carrd, which i think is beautifully made !

maybe u could make the pics/colors match the theme more ? i cant rly critique on that tho bc my current carrd doesnt match my theme at all lol !

 tbh i rly love it <3

4/5

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location !

so cute and love the font !!

maybe add a cute symbol tho, like a music sign or smth :)

4/5

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overall opinion, i absolutely love ur acc ! i think theres so many beautiful elements abt it and so much potential <3 not only that, ur writing is incredible and ur an insanely sweet friend !

my only critique overall is cohesion and just making the different parts work together a bit more. ofc tho, i honestly think everyone struggles w that while creating their acc's aesthetic !

also another reminder that i rate accs based on their visual appeal... so this is not at all negative towards ur writing skills ! i think ur an incredible talented author ofc <3

total !

52/70

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