Title: The Door To Love

Genre: Short Story

Mature (or not): Not mature

Author: @crazylazysubu

Recommended Audience: Anyone who likes a bit of romance and low-key drama, and doesn't mind if it's cliche ^^

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this! Spelling and grammar on point, and I'm really impressed that you tackled a kiss scene in chapter 39! These are so difficult to get right, and personally, they absolutely terrify me as a writer. Also, in the second paragraph from the bottom of the same chapter, the repetition of 'I liked' was really effective ^^ Overall a great story, I found it difficult to fault in quite a few places!

Here are some things I'd look at in terms of improving from here:

- Try and vary your sentence length a little more. At times, it felt a little robotic, but that may be just me?

- This may stem from only having read three chapters, but as it stands, I don't have much of an idea who these characters are.

- Sometimes, and this may be just me, the dialogue sounds a little unnatural - the characters are speaking in a way that sounds really formal to me.

And the cover is fantastic! Seriously, kudos to whoever made that. (Was it you? Because wow, it looks great!)

-Brileaf

P.s: sorry this took so long, I've been away and have little time xD

This book was co-reviewed by Colbyarys - (Brileaf's chucking this in here because he deserves credit too :3)