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𝟝. The World Of Poems by helloimapoet 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 13/20

The poems are a bit cliche - they didn't engage me a lot but I can tell that they were written with heart and soul. Despite the cliche, it was a wonderful read.

Concept 10/10

The poems are structured well and definitely fit the title of the poem that is set on them.

Cover 5/10

The cover isn't very attractive but it does show the meaning behind all the poems in the book.

The book description 3/10

Honestly, I wasn't pulled in by the book description at all. It didn't hook me, just basically told me what to expect about the book and nothing really about the book at all.

Technicalities 30/50

Everything seemed okay grammar and spelling-wise. The poems had an odd rhyming scheme, one I couldn't quite catch, but otherwise, were a good read.

Total 61/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 17/20

The poems were well structured and a bit cliche sometimes. They would dive deep into the dark depths of life and make them feel bearable.

Concept 9/10

The poems were touching and sad but they would have this charm to bring the cheerful moments back.

Cover 5/10

The cover is simple and a bit boring, minimizing the size of the badges will help the reader to actually pay attention to the cover.

The book description 2/10

The book description wasn't attractive at all. Changing it into something better which describes the book will make it appear more sublime.

Technicalities 43/50

The poems were appealing to me because of what they were focused on. The rhyme scheme was nice.

Total 76/100

Total from both judges 137/200

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𝟜.Turn the Paige by Evergreen_Ebony 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 14/20

Honestly, this story didn't capture my attention very much. I have read books like this before, and although they weren't completely the same, I did admire Paige's friendship with Madeline and Casey.

Concept 9/10

The concept of the story is good, I have to say. The idea of having Paige as a freshman and a struggling student with a man who's no-nonsense is an interesting concept.

Cover 6/10

Although not very eye-catching, the cover does have a fun, freshman vibe to it as well as a teen fiction vibe.

The book description 5/10

The book description was a bit cluttered and confusing - it was a little hard to understand what I was going to be reading about. Was I going to witness a slow-burn love between Paige and Brian, or was I going to see a story about two best friends going through school together? It was difficult to grasp.

Technicalities 47/50

I liked the use of English slang in this book, and although I am not from England, I found it amusing to imagine how Paige spoke. There weren't any grammatical errors that I saw, and all in all, a wonderful read!

Total 81/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 15/20

I was generally interested in this book before becoming the judge but it doesn't really have a sense of originality. You can predict certain aspects and scenes in the chapters.

Concept 6/10

The story does seem cliche but the way it's described makes it better.

Cover 4/10

The cover helps the reader to envision the characters.

The book description 3/10

The book description was like walking down a winding staircase, with no destination in mind. The plot was clear from the blurb.

Technicalities 45/50

It was fun to read and it was edited quite nicely. The English slangs were a little hard for me, but they helped shape the book nicely.

Total 73/100

Total from both judges 154/200

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𝟛.23Days Of September by divaakoto 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 17/20

The author has a certain way that hooks the reader immediately at the beginning, but then I begin to find myself losing interest as the poem goes on. It starts off dramatically and wonderfully but waters down as the poem continues.

Concept 6/10

I don't really understand how the title connects with the poetry book, but then again, there's always an underlay of the poetry book's title in the poems, so maybe I just didn't see it. The concept is otherwise sturdy and very good.

Cover 9/10

The cover does fit the general theme of the book, although I would suggest making the background picture a bit clearer and changing the font to something maybe more blockish.

The book description 5/10

While the first few lines were moving, the book description did not draw me in at all. It didn't really push me to read the book, rather it just gave me a blank description of what was going to be told in the story.

Technicalities 45/50

There wasn't anything wrong that I saw technicality-wise. Everything was interesting to read. I'm not sure if there are supposed to be periods at the end of a poem sentence, though, and there were some places where the rhymes didn't match, but all in all, a good read.

Total 82/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 18/20

The poems really have the author curious about how it might end. Giving a bigger picture will help the reader get a better sense of what's happening.

Concept 6/10

The concept might help others feel solace but a new name will help. The old name is beautiful but it doesn't really compliment the book.

Cover 7/10

The cover suits the poems but it is a little unclear and hard to tell apart. The font used on the cover is really beautiful.

The book description 5/10

The book description seemed very personal but didn't give much information about the poems. The reader might be able to tell that the poems will be dark by the blurb.

Technicalities 46/50

There were little to no spelling/grammar mistakes. Adding a bit more diversity will improve the quality of the poems.

Total 82/100

Total from both judges 164/200

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𝟚.Unmuzzle by Forest45 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 19/20

The content of these poems are very engaging and lives up to the expectations the author puts on them in the cover and blurb.

Concept 10/10

The poems are structured amazingly and it's easy to see why the author chose "Unmuzzle" as the title of the book.

Cover 8/10

While it is a little hard to read the text of the cover, the chains are an excellent addition to the black background and really depict the poems that the author writes.

The book description 10/10

Although the book description is very short, it's also very powerful and draws the reader in very strongly. Once I read the description, I immediately wanted to see what the author had in store with their writing.

Technicalities 45/50

There were no grammar/punctuation/vocab issues that I caught, and although the poems are long, they are really well structured and carry an important theme in each one. Well done!

Total 92/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_ 

Engagement 19/20

The poems are highly engaging and well structured.

Concept 10/10

I love how all of the poems are written so beautifully, the rhyme scheme was a tricky one but your poems didn't seem to have any problem with it.

Cover 10/10

The new cover is stunning!

The book description 9/10

The book description was short yet compelling at the same time.

Technicalities 48/50

The poems are long but the way they are carried helps in making them feel even more comforting.

Total 96/100

Total from both judges 188/200

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𝟙.Timeless by kakolisingha 

Judge AlphaLover15 

Engagement 17/20

Although not the best hook, as you keep reading, the author gives a bright and colorful story about different people, different genres, and different relationships that puts a smile on the reader's face.

Concept 10/10

This story, to me, is a new concept because I've never seen anything like it before. It's unique and a beautiful read!

Cover 10/10

The cover is very eye-catching and the peacock is gorgeous! Really captures the beauty of India in one cover!

The book description 10/10

The book description is clear and on point. The author doesn't beat around the bush and does an amazing job of telling us what is going to happen in the story.

Technicalities 49/50

Everything was amazing in this story! The characters were incredible, the plot flowed, there were no grammar issues, and all in all, it was a very fun and good read!

Total 96/100

Judge Luna_Butterfly_

Engagement 19/20

The story was wonderful to read!

Concept 9/10

The concept was fun to read as they were one-shots and some had surprising endings.

Cover 10/10

The cover was the best part of the book. It had the diversity of India captured in just one look.

The book description 9/10

The blurb was superb!

Technicalities 48/50

Even after reading the entire book, there were very few mistakes.

Total 95/100

Total from both judges 191/200

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