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Results

𝟝. Parlor Tricks by 0liviaRose436 

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 16/20

The story in later parts seemed balanced out better and felt more pulling.

Concept 8/10

The concept is nothing too new but the narrative feels fresh.

Cover 9/10

The new cover seems good as well, feel fitting to the theme of the book.

The book description 8/10

The description is good and interesting, it matches the book theme as well.

Technicalities 44/50

The descriptions are great and grammar as well. I was glad to see that later parts obtained better balance and there is more dialogue. And later the story is told in dialogue which doesn't feel like an info dump as well.

Total 85/100

Judge that-1-shy-girl 

Engagement 15/20

The chapters felt a little bit rushed.

Concept 8/10

The concept has been done before, but I like the plots.

Cover 10/10

I like the new cover. It is simple and gravitates you towards reading the book.

The book description 9/10

The description is good. it gives you the genre and tells you the theme of the book.

Technicalities 45/50

The grammar and spelling are good. There is a lot of dialogue during some parts to which I can't really picture anything happening, or even know what they're doing.

Total 87/100

Total from both judges 172/200

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𝟜. What the Eyes can See by heyennbee 

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 18/20

The story has a great hook right from the start and my interest grew from the end of chapter one. Each part has something that makes me read more and some unexpected twists as well. I wanted a bit more interaction between Isla and Ryan, before the event. It did have an impact but if we would see them interact more it would have an even bigger surprise. The interest didn't disappear with later chapters and captures the genre well. With each new part, there is something that makes me read more and good cliffhangers at the end of chapters as well.

Concept 9/10

The concept is great and relatively new as well. Isla's power is explained right away in a natural way and I loved that part. And making Isla a gray character seems like a fitting and unexpected choice.

Cover 9/10

The new cover might look less aesthetic than the previous one but captures the story well and fits the genre as well.

The book description 9/10

The description is truly intriguing and gives just enough information to want to read the book.

Technicalities 43/50

Grammar, punctuation, and descriptions are great. However, dialogue tags in some places might be useful. There are major changes when it comes to the main character and her morals seemed tainted but that was one the of things that kept me interested.

Total 88/100

Judge that-1-shy-girl 

Engagement 18/20

I thought the hook was good. The first chapter is very interesting, it made me want to keep reading, and get to know why she was the figure who had been hurt. Each other really caught my attention and made me feel excited. I do however wish that there was more speaking dialogue. I enjoyed reading it. The whole thing was very intriguing and kept me interested in reading further.

Concept 8/10

I've certainly never read a story like this before, I thought the idea was very unique and drew the reader's attention. It has a great concept. It's something I haven't seen before in a book.

Cover 9/10

I love the cover of the book. It looks clean and it goes with the title of the book very well. Also, the way the title is placed on the cover is great. I can tell what it says and how it's placed.

The book description 9/10

The description is good. It tells me the theme and seems to draw the potential reader's attention.

Technicalities 48/50

Grammar, spelling, punctuation, dialogue structure. Writing style. Character description and development. The writing style is great. I can follow along with the story and not get confused. Not really any spelling mistakes. You describe the characters really well. Some chapters have too much dialogue while some don't have any.

Total 92/100

Total from both judges 180/200

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𝟛. Cocytus by empiresofwater 

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 18/20

The story grew more interesting with each chapter keeping mystery as well.

Concept 9/10

The concept feels unique and interesting.

Cover 9/10

The cover is amazing and captures the story perfectly.

The book description 10/10

The book is very well described. It captures attention and gives enough information to want to read the story.

Technicalities 47/50

Grammar, spelling is great and there is a diversity in word choice as well. The detailed descriptions made it easy to imagine everything. Point of view switches are clear and written in a good way.

Total 93/100

Judge that-1-shy-girl 

Engagement 17/20

This story kept me really invested. It got really interesting and made me want to keep reading.

Concept 9/10

I've certainly never read a book like this before with this concept. It was written and told so well.

Cover 8/10

The cover is really nice. It is a bit blurred but that just makes it look even better, and I like how it is almost all grey.

The book description 9/10

The book description is perfect. I love how it tells us the main plot and gives us an idea of what the main character is like, and the genre.

Technicalities 45/50

. The descriptions around the book are nice, and the spelling seems to be all correct.

Total 88/100

Total from both judges 181/200

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𝟚. Keep Busy by simplyhorrible 

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 20/20

The story is very interesting and kept me engaged the entire time. Looking forward to reading the story further.

Concept 10/10

The concept is nothing new but shown in a distinct way.

Cover 9/10

The cover is good but doesn't do justice to the story.

The book description 9/10

The description is good, but a few key details about Frank might help to make it better. He is the reason which made me so interested to read more, so adding more about his character might help.

Technicalities 49/50

All technical aspects are good, with a few incompleted/misspelled words which do not occur often. It's my personal favorite book from these awards. I will definitely read more.

Total 97/100

Judge that-1-shy-girl 

Engagement 16/20

The hook is good, but as I was reading on I wish the main girl character was introduced much earlier on. It would have made me less bored I guess, and more intrigued with her character.

Concept 8/10

I do like the concept of the book, even though it's been done many times.

Cover 7/10

The cover is good, but it doesn't fit with this genre.

The book description 6/10

The book's description is okay. I wish it told me more about the plot, and what the characters were like.

Technicalities 48/50

There are a few spelling mistakes in the book, but I like how the book and characters are described. I can picture everything perfectly.

Total 85/100

Total from both judges 182/200

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𝟙. The Housewife's Secret by m_writes_45 

Judge OutOfMyImagination 

Engagement 16/20

The first chapter did wonders when it came to mystery, and even though later there was no major action, later on, I was still pulled to read more. Later the mystery and action felt less present with each chapter, lowering engagement. The story is still interesting enough to read.

Concept 8/10

The concept is good. It's nothing too new but written in a fresh way.

Cover 8/10

The cover is good, but it could be more mysterious to fit with the story theme better.

The book description 9/10

The description is good and intriguing. However, the title is not representing the story that well and it could be something more intriguing.

Technicalities 48/50

Grammar, spelling, punctuation, dialogue structure is written well. There were a few incompleted words, nothing too major. It was one or two words in all ten chapters. The writing style has a balance between storytelling and description and I loved it. Character description and development seem good as well.

Total 89/100

Judge that-1-shy-girl 

Engagement 19/20

I was engaged the whole time. It really sought my interest and made me want to keep reading.

Concept 8/10

I like the concept a lot. It seems really intriguing and new to me. I've seen stories where they have mysterious neighbors but the way it's represented in the book is very interesting.

Cover 9/10

I like the cover. I like the soft colors they really go together, but it doesn't seem like the right fit for a thriller book

The book description 10/10

The book description is very interesting, it doesn't give too much away about the story. It got me really excited to read the book.

Technicalities 48/50

Grammar, spelling, punctuation, dialogue structure. Writing style. Character description and development. The book is deceived very well. I can picture everything that's happening in the book and not get confused. There aren't really any spelling mistakes. The character development is coming along through the book nicely.

Total 94/100

Total from both judges 183/200

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