Thank you so much to both our wonderful judges Duncana1003 and RaphaelStout234 for judging the categories and most importantly sending the results on time ! ♥️

                 🍬1st place🍬

        earlfangs and 0liviaRose436

                  🍬2nd Place🍬

                 VictoriaLachac

                  🍬3rd place🍬

                     penpatron

Please pm me to get your stickers in the format given in the " IMPORTANT CHAPTER" and all other prizes will be will be given out soon soon!♥️

PARTICIPANTS SCORES

1.Arctic Heart by penpatron

Does it match story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab attention? 5/5

How well is it crafted? 4/5

Creativity 4/5

Originality 5/5

Overall Impression 4/5

Total: 27/30

Review: The first chapter of Arctic Heart is suspenseful and action filled. It really builds intrigue and grabs attention. There are a few small errors, but nothing distracting. This is a great start to a story.

2.Aragons by earlfangs

Does it match story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab attention? 5/5

How well is it crafted? 5/5

Creativity 5/5

Originality 5/5

Overall Impression 5/5

Total: 30/30

Review: The first full paragraph automatically pulls the reader in. It is very easy to connect with the characters and action with the descriptions and small details from the start. There is plenty of action to keep the reader on the edge of their seat. Very well done.

3.Morning by mbrown567

Does it match story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab attention? 2/5

How well is it crafted? 1/5

Creativity 4/5

Originality 4/5

Overall Impression 2/5

Total: 18/30

Review: The idea is interesting, and the action really helps pull the first chapter along. Some areas were a bit hard to get through. Try to break the dialogue up a bit. It is easy to get lost with a whole conversation in one paragraph. Also, when using tags, commas are needed instead of periods. Example: "Yes," he said. There are also errors that need edited to improve flow. Emotion can help grab a readers attention. For instance, the main characters father died, and he just moves on. While I understand time is of the essence, you can add a bit of emotion here without getting him killed. The action at the end adds suspense to the chapter, but try adding a hook at the beginning somewhere to keep the reader interested.

4.Erin's Fire by moonbraker23

Does it match story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab attention? 4/5

How well is it crafted? 3/5

Creativity 4/5

Originality 4/5

Overall Impression 3/5

Total: 23/30

Review: The opening paragraph really grabs attention. Punctuation errors slowed the flow in a few places. Some sentences separated by commas should be separated by periods or re-worded. This is an intriguing first chapter and a great start to the story.

5.The Green Guardian by CroodsGirl

Does it match story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab attention? 4/5

How well is it crafted? 4/5

Creativity 4/5

Originality 5/5

Overall Impression 4/5

Total: 26/30

Review: The authors uses wonderful descriptions that pull the reader in. The action and suspense throughout also help keep the reader reading. I noticed that between scenes, the scenes are broken up by only an extra space. Some sort of page break would be better in these places, because the extra space is not always easy to notice and may confuse readers a bit. The very first part was very suspenseful and really pulled me in. Great job!

6.The Different Mixtures by Shaunatay

Results:

Does the first chapter match the story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? 3/5

How well is it crafted? 3/5

Creativity 5/5

Originality 5/5

Overall impression 4/5

Total 25/30

Review:

It's a good plot and an interesting first chapter. I suggest working on the grammar and punctuation a bit, but overall, I really liked it.

7.Obsessed with my classmate by AayushiS13

Results:

Does the first chapter match the story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? 3/5

How well is it crafted? 3/5

Creativity 5/5

Originality 4/5

Overall impression 3/5

Total 23/30

Review:

The first chapter was a good start to the story. The spelling and punctuation just need to be twinged a little here and there. The in-between pictures added flavor to the start of the book.

8.Secret Lovers by @ShellyratedxMJ

Results:

Does the first chapter match the story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? 4/5

How well is it crafted? 3/5

Creativity 5/5

Originality 4/5

Overall impression 4/5

Total 25/30

Review:

I liked the first chapter, because it was very creative and eye-catching. I saw few mistakes, and I was really pleased with the way you introduced the characters to us.

9.Ocean Storm by VictoriaLachac

Results:

Does the first chapter match the story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? 5/5

How well is it crafted? 4/5

Creativity 5/5

Originality 5/5

Overall impression 5/5

Total 29/30

Review:

I loved the first chapter. It was so intriguing. It kept me hooked onto every word.

10. On the Edge of Tomorrow by 0liviaRose436

Results:

Does the first chapter match the story? 5/5

Is it attractive enough to grab your attention? 5/5

How well is it crafted? 5/5

Creativity 5/5

Originality 5/5

Overall impression 5/5

Total 30/30

Review:

The first chapter had an amazing start to the story and I loved the writing style.It makes me want to read more, which is the importance of the first chapter.

Don't lose your heart if you didn't win. May be it was not your lucky day :) and try to improve the points you lacked :)
All the very best for your future endeavours ❤