YOU DONT KNOW HOW LONG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS AHHHH

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUPPORTING ME THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE JOURNEY OF WRITING SWEET NIGHTMARES T^T

So I'm typing everything out with my hand this time >:D

No copy and paste today

okay uh im copy and pasting the translations cuz this review answers are in spanish <333

Your username
AbrilNathaly

What can I call you?
Abril :D

ABRIL-CHAAAAAAN

Lmao thanks for reading Sweet nightmares and all of ur comments Abril-chan <333

So the writing and stuff first- idk-

Rate Naruto's character
9/10

Rate the storyline 
9/10

Rate the cover
9/10

Rate the grammar
10/10

Rate the writing and use of words
10/10

O-0 I don't think my story deserves that much-

THANK YOUUU

And I appreciate how you commented in English sometimes <33

OKII REACTIONSS

OML IM ACTUALLY SHIVERING IN EXCITEMENT-

ITS SUCH A LONG PARAGRAPH IM SO EXCITED-

Your favourite scene/incident
Hmm ... I have several favorite scenes. Like when Naruto was with Kiba and he grabbed a stone to hit his forehead and laughed while bleeding. When they were about to hit him, he started laughing and then crying. When he killed the villagers, uff ... the feeling I felt was very gratifying. In short, I loved every episode of Naruto's madness.

Yesssss Naruto's madness- the whole point to the story-

It's also my favourite part to write besides character deaths XD

Your reaction to Kiba's death
I refused to accept it. Kiba won my love, and it was inevitable that it hurt. His death was what marked a before and after :(

Yaa....

:'D

Anyways Satomi's death.

Your reaction to Satomi's death
That one took me by surprise. I mean, Naruto killed an entire village because they supposedly killed her, and after knowing she was alive, he killed her hahah

Yep...if I were the one reading it I'd be surprised too-

But Naruto came back smiling not because he avenged Satomi, he came back smiling because he liked it-

And one of the reasons he killed Satomi was because he wanted to feel the same excitement :D

Your reaction to Naruto's death
My heart aches, but I knew this would happen sooner or later. At least my baby is already resting in peace.

:'D

That made me kinda sad-

Your reaction to Itachi's death
It was ... hard, but it didn't hurt that much, I don't know why XD

Maybe because it's not dramatic enough-?

Actually, fun fact, I wasn't planning on making Naruto's death dramatic.

I was planning to make it like Kakashi killed a shadow clone-

But nope it was actually Naruto and he actually died.

But i dunno how to write it so yeah

Your reaction to Kakashi's death
The truth ... a bullet hurts less. Made me cry :'(

Lmao- 

I think I put too much into the last chapter :D

:00 I got a 3/5 for the explanations-

I mean the explanation IS crappy...

I shoulda put it in the story LMAOO-

What ending would you have chosen?
Naruto's death (original)

If you can revive ONE character....
I won't revive anyone

If you can change ONE thign that happened in the story...
Lmaoo I don't know what to change

Do you think Naruto's death was the right choice?
Yes

So basically nothing will change.

:D

Okayy last part :DD

Part that needs improvement
mmm ... idk, I think that's how Naruto got the sharingan. Even if you explained it, it would have been better for it to be part of the story.

Your conclusion / comment /suggestions
For me the story is pretty good. What is necessary is that the explanations have been given all within the story, not as an author's note. I think that's all. All the rest I loved. I will probably reread it for the third time xd

Hmm....true.

The explanation might be mixed in the story in Black roses though.

Just maybe.

.....Okay probably not BUT ANYWAYSS-

Side Note for Author-chan
I AM VERY EXCITED BY BLACK ROSES, but plss Shimiko, don't feel pressured when it comes to writing. Do everything at your own time and write until you are satisfied with your work, the most important thing is your comfort. For my part, don't worry if you make us wait, I'll wait as long as necessary. Thanks for everything! ILY <3

No, thank YOU for everything T^TTTTT

Seriously, you were one of the reasons I was able to finish sweet nightmares and of course along with a few others-

THANK YOU!

Well bai bai =W=