when by anumitha

STRENGTHS:
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my points:

○ the book has short chapters, which makes it an easy, fun read.

○ the cover and title are intriguing.

○ interesting plot about a chemist & his dead son.

WEAKNESSES:
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my points:

○ uninformative description.

○ info-dump writing style.

○ grammar could use improvement.

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