to the ground by kara

i've given kara a review before, so this is gonna be short!

STRENGTHS:
tag the writer and comment inline what you liked about the book.

i generally liked this book! i've been reading it ever since i reviewed it, and i await updates.

my points:

○ appealing first impression

○ distinct characters

○ great hook and worldbuilding

WEAKNESSES:
tag the writer and comment inline what issues you found and your suggestions for improvements. be nice and respectful.

my points:

○ grammar

○ some places could use more descriptions

tag here people who haven't been active on your story and didn't give feedback.

questions for me or the writer? go ahead, but tag the person you talk to!

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