pangaea by kayla

STRENGTHS:
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my points:

○ attractive first impression (altho the description has a lot of grammatical mistakes)

○ an intriguing plot for sci-fi lovers.

○ descriptive yet not boring writing style. i appreciate you didn't info-dump and explained everything in context.

○ great hook/cliffhanger at the end of chapter 1.

WEAKNESSES:
tag the writer and comment inline what issues you found and your suggestions for improvements. be nice and respectful.

my points:

○ for the most part, the book was readable, but you have a handful of errors that can be edited. 

and that's it! i think you have a neat, exciting story there!

i'm sorry this came out late! i'm finally covid free and back to my activity on wattpad.

tag here people who haven't been active on your story and didn't give feedback.

questions for me or the writer? go ahead, but tag the person you talk to!

and we're done with batch 1! thank you to everyone who participated. it was a pleasure reading all your books and meeting different writers. i wish you all the best and invite you to join me in my other writing projects! my page is always open for further help. my instagram is annabellacxwp if you ever wanna chat about writing! <3

ciao!

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