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Judged by SSears90
Armful of Hope by LAJoyner
Cover 4/5
The cover represents the story well with J Hope as the main character. I will just point out that at the bottom where it has your name written, it’s hard to read it because the font color blends into the book cover.
Title 5/5
The title fits the story, and I like the way you even incorporated J Hope’s name into the title. It’s very fitting.
Blurb 3/5
The blurb is a bit hard to follow. The beginning “They fell alright! Right into each other and love.” can be confusing because it doesn’t specify which character you’re talking about, but then it says “his bandmates” so the reader might be wondering “Whose bandmates?” The random grumble from Yoongi does seem a bit out of place, as he is the only character actually named aside from J Hope. It doesn’t give too much information about what is going to happen with J Hope and the OC, I think that could be described a bit more.
Characters 15/15
The characters have a lot of emotions that are portrayed realistically. Their interactions and reactions are believable and they’re personalities are written well. I like the brotherhood bond you represented with all of the members and how they’re all incorporated into the story.
First Chapter 10/10
The first chapter does a good job of setting the mood of the story, with J Hope liking the OC and how he tells Jimin about it. I think it sets up for a nice plot and grabs reader interest.
Pace 9/10
It was overall paced out well, however there are some interactions that could be fleshed out more such as when J Hope is talking to the OC about how he rather be called Jae. It felt like he started releasing his feelings rather quickly without some build up.
Creativeness + Plot 15/15
The plot is creative and you bring your imagination to life with it so good job there. It was exciting to see the relationship between J Hope and Yeona blossom, especially since they both had feelings for a while before they even started officially dating. You made the story your own with how you presented each character, and I especially like how you’re currently portraying the jealousy and hatred within Rey over the whole situation.
Grammar 8/10
There are a few grammatical mistakes throughout the book. For example in chapter one the sentence starts “Jimin says, “Don’t like to me.” After that it says “he grins.” He should be capitalized here. There are a few instances of this throughout.
Interest of Story 10/10
I found a lot of interest in the story. I was excited to read about Rey’s jealousy when J Hope and Yeona officially started dating, I was waiting to see how he would react to that and I’m curious to see how that little side part plays out too.
Uniqueness 5/5
It’s a unique story as you describe feelings of J Hope and the OC well. I think including an OC in this story makes it very unique as you created your own world with your own character that has their own feelings, hobbies, and personality.
Total 84/90
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Judged by SSears90
Chasing Shadows by strawberry1d
Cover 4/5
The cover is aesthetically pleasing and everything can be seen and read well. I will say it seems like the characters are a bit harsh against the background. What I mean is by blending the edges of the characters into the background more it will seem more incorporated into the background image and not just placed over it.
Title 5/5
The title is memorable and brings great interested to the reader.
Blurb 5/5
The blurb perfectly describes who the main characters are and the obstacles each one of them will face. It raises interested without giving away any spoilers, but give just enough detail to cover the main plot of the book.
Characters 15/15
The characters are all presented well. You have original characters that are realistic and their storylines and personalities make sense. You represent people and their emotions well throughout the story.
First Chapter 10/10
The first chapter introduces characters and the story well. It sets the tone of the book and hooks the reader in.
Pace 7/10
There were some aspects to the story that could have picked up a bit more, as some parts seemed to be a bit slow paced. The book is well over 70+ chapters and I think the story can be condensed by taking out some scenes that aren’t completely relevant to the story, such as things that can be taken out without leaving any plot holes whether it be interactions between characters are certain scenes taking place.
Creativeness + Plot 12/15
I like the plot, overall the plot is very creative. However there are so many images used to show scenes that it becomes distracting and pulls away from the creativeness that can be shown through describing scenes instead of showing them through images.
Grammar 8/10
There are a few grammatical errors in the dialogue tags throughout the story and there are instances where words that should be capitalized aren’t and vise versa, mainly revolving around the dialogue tags.
Interest of Story 8/10
The story and plot are interesting, but there are elements I feel were added that didn’t particularly need to be which could really shorten down how many chapters there are to the story. 70+ is quite a lot and in my experience sometimes readers will turn away from a story simply because of how many chapters they see written, so that is something to keep in mind.
Uniqueness 5/5
The story is very unique and it’s a plot that is not over-represented. I also noticed the use of a lot of British terms/lingo in this story which was unique for me to see, I don’t often come across stories written this way.
Total 79/90
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Judged by SSears90
Letter Across The River by Mochi711
Cover 5/5
The cover is simple yet cute. I like the representation of J Hope making a paper plane and getting ready to send it off, it really fits the theme of the story well. I can imagine him throwing it and it flying over the river.
Title 5/5
The title fits the story well and it’s something that will draw readers in. It’s a nice, memorable title for the story.
Blurb 3/5
While the blurb mentions the overall plot of the story, more could be added to it. Such as , who is the friend that J Hope is sending these letters to? Why is he sending them? What kinds of things will he be writing about?
Characters 15/15
J Hope is the main character throughout the story, and really the only perspective we get. You do a great job of representing him and not only his love for Essie but also the relationship he has with the others while he’s writing these letters. You represent his emotions well throughout the entire story.
First Chapter 10/10
The first chapter is the first short letter J Hope writes, and it’s super cute. I can sense how silly he feels about being late writing the letter, and it sets the tone of their friendship well.
Pace 10/10
The pace was great. It wasn’t too fast or too slow, and everything really added up in the end.
Creativeness + Plot 15/15
I have actually never read a story like this before. Setting it up as letters is super creative and it’s cool to see what is written from the first person perspective. It felt like I was the one receiving and reading these letters which really creates such an interesting plot.
Grammar 10/10
Good grammar throughout the story. I didn’t run in to any issues.
Interest of Story 10/10
This story literally wrapped itself around my heart and stayed there. The way it was written as letters really caught my interest, and I just love how it was presented. And then-oh BOY- about half way through this story my heart clenched up because I started thinking “Why isn’t Essie ever writing him back? If he’s visiting her so often, why does he even have to write these letters?” And then my suspicions grew, and I was literally holding back tears hoping my prediction was wrong. And then the ending, when he goes to see Essie...I was literally a ball of waterworks. Not many stories make me cry but this was one of them. Thanks so much for such an amazing story.
Uniqueness 5/5
This story was extremely unique in terms of the plot and how it was written.
Total 88/90
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Judged by Yoonkeeri
Tomatoes by Jahools
Cover: 4/5
The cover is pretty and definitely eye-catching. I love that it features tomatoes, which are central to the story. We have our protagonists there, and everything looks cool! However, I feel like it could have been a bit clearer. That's all, but it's still pretty good!
Title: 5/5
The title is good as well, it's unusual, but in a good way! It's interesting because it features a vegetable, and it sparked curiosity within me. It fits the story well; overall, it's good! ;)
Blurb: 5/5
The blurb is really short, but you made me believe that the words are enough to interest someone even if it's brief. The tomatoes representing Yoongi's life, which was pitiful and shriveled up, is a compelling metaphor. It's a really good idea! And Hoba's lines, saying the tomatoes could be saved and they aren't dead, feels like he's saying it to Yoongi as well. It's really interesting, you know. Well done!
Characters: 15/15
Everything about the characters is just amajin. I really loved them all. Their emotions are well expressed, their development and their dynamics are well structured too!
I loved everything, especially Yoongi not wanting to forget about Jia and Hobi not forcing him to. I just loved Hobi's personallity through out the book! It just shows the love he really has for Yoongi.
When it comes to Yoongi, I felt like I was listening to a real life person whose wife died, and I just want to tell that you expressed Yoongi's grief beautifully through out the chapters. And I love how his and Hoba's emotions and feelings grew gradually; it's not a slow pace but a perfect balance. It developed really well.
And for Hobi, I am telling you, I just fell in love with him! His love for his garden and him being there for Yoongi-- I really loved everything about him!
And the others supporting characters also contributed greatly to Hoba and the whole story.
I think this is a story where Hoba can be the only one to fit right! Well done, I really don't have anything to criticize– Just Amajin!!! XD
First Chapter: 10/10
The first chapter is a pretty good start, introducing us to many things, including all the characters, in just one chapter. It set the mood really well and made me want to continue reading! And yeahh, that "I drove" parts of that chapter were just-- lmao, really good. I really enjoyed it! It was amajin too!
Pace of the story: 10/10
The pace is well-balanced. So it's all good! ;)
Creativeness + Plot: 15/15
Now, now– I really want to tell you this is the creativity we all need. Who would have thought we could create such an engaging plot with tomatoes? Your creativity deserves a 100 out of 100, and the plot is just amajin! I know I'm saying amajin too many times, but you really deserve thousands of amajins because you're amajin, as is your plot! After completing the book, I was like– "Will I get to read more of this story? Will there be more chapters?" I was really thinking for an hour about how come I hadn't come across this wonderful book before. This is the impression you have made on me. I can never forget this wonderful story. The plot might seem simple, but you made it look so wonderful. I don't think any other writer could have done it as well as you did. Overall, this is such a wonderful plot with truly unique creativity.
Writing style: 10/10
The writing style is simple and neat. It is descriptive when necessary, but otherwise, it remains straightforward and not too cryptic or vague. It's just clear and easy to understand, with a good style that I really like. It flows really well, and is unique in its own way. Great job! ;)
Grammar: 9.8/10
The grammar was quite neat, with everything just so on point. However, there were some unnecessary commas in a few places-- about four or five instances. Fortunately, they didn't affect the flow of my reading. Overall, you did an amajin job!
Interest of the story: 10/10
The story was really interesting to me. As I mentioned earlier, it is an amajin book with a creative storyline. With each chapter, I was curious about what would happen next and I just spent my time reading everything in a single sitting. It was something new to me, and it will forever remain in my heart. It was that wonderful!
Uniqueness: 5/5
Again, the uniqueness is outstanding. The whole book is truly memorable, and I bet all the other readers felt the same. You did a good job with everything.
Total: 88.8/90
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Judged by Yoonkeeri
Hurt written by Ivna_jung
Cover: 5/5
The cover looks good and eye-catching. I feel like it will definitely attract readers. And I absolutely loved the phrase used in it. I do think the font style of the phrase could be changed, but still, I love it!
Title: 4/5
The title is simple and straightforward, and I love it. However, there are already so many similar titles on Wattpad, so it might be difficult for you to stand out among them. That's all, but I still like it!
Blurb: 3/5
The blurb is pretty good and interesting, giving us a glimpse of what the book might be about. However, I feel like the points in the blurb could be arranged in a better order or written as a whole paragraph, as they seem out of place for me. There are also some punctuation errors and a spelling mistake. I hope the writer edits them in the future. still, I really love those lines; they feel relatable and have the potential to grab the readers' attention. ;)
Characters: 9/15
The story is centered around Hoba, with the other BTS members as side characters. However, I feel that the emotions of the characters could be expressed better, especially those of the other members. Their reaction to getting angry at Hoba based on lies told by the manager over the phone, accompanied by a few pictures, doesn't really showcase their bond well. Their emotions seemed a bit out of place from there, even though the beginning part was good. After the manager's call, it seemed to somewhat fall apart. I am glad that at least Tae believed him, but you could have built up their feelings and emotions before that call and could have described that scene well. The same thing goes for the other group as well.
First Chapter Impression: 6.5/10
The first chapter went straight into the story, which I really appreciate. It definitely sets the mood for the book. However, there are too many grammatical mistakes, spelling and punctuation errors, making it a bit distracting to enjoy. I hope you do a good editing to correct them. ;)
Pace of the story: 7/10
The story was a bit fast-paced at times and slow-paced at other times. It still needs to find a good balance.
Creativeness + Plot: 8/15
I have read many stories like this before, so it felt kind of similar, which can actually make some other readers lose interest. Even if it's unique in it's own way, it could be little disadvantageous for you. However, I liked how there was another group involved with one of the members being a hidden stepbrother of Hoba. Overall, since this felt too similar to other books I have read on this app, it didn't manage to fully captivate me. But hey, you tried your best in writing them from your perspective, so good job! Also, I know it's a completed book, but I hope you try adding in more different diverse scenes into the story. This will surely benefit you a lot.
Writing style: 6/10
The writing style is simple and easy to read, but it still has the potential to improve and make it more interesting!
Grammar: 6/10
There are many grammatical mistakes and sudden capitalizations of words out of nowhere. Also, remember to use the basic form of verbs when using "does," "doesn't," "did," and "didn't." I hope you correct these issues. Many punctuation marks are missing, so doing a thorough edit of the whole book will greatly improve the story!
Interest of the story: 7/10
I know it's a similar plot, but it still interested me. Even though the story was intriguing, the lack of good grammar overshadowed my interest. I really think the writer needs to work on that!
Uniqueness: 3/5
Again, since this is a story with similar plots, it doesn't seem to be that unique. But I believe the writer can make it better!
Total: 64.5/90
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Judged by Yoonkeeri
Soul Piece written by kookiebear0901
Cover: 3.9/5
The cover looks good, featuring our main protagonist Hoba. However, the words added at the top of the cover aren't visible enough. The sun and moon behind Hoba could have been edited better along with the puzzle pieces in the cover.
You can try applying to some amajin graphic shops in this app; there are numerous graphic designers who can help you with a great cover that describes the well-organized plot more effectively! Still, you have done your best, great job! ;)
Title: 5/5
The title is really good, and I love it. It's the main element of the story, and it's really well chosen for the book!
Blurb: 4/5
The blurb is actually pretty good, and it really hooked me to open the book and read it. It's not too short or long, just enough to interest me.
There are some errors, like the absence of the article "the" after "Sun" and the capitalization of "W" after ";" Also, the ellipses should be three dots. Overall, it's pretty good! ;)
Characters: 15/15
The characters were amazing, especially Hoba, who is one of the main protagonists. I love how you gave some more sparks for the other side characters to shine as well!
At first, it was kind of confusing to understand who's whose brother and sister, but after reading some more, I got to understand it better, and it wasn't really a problem.
I really loved Hoba's character through out the story, and you really expressed everyone's emotions well! Great job, writer! xD
First Chapter Impression: 9/10
The first chapter was amazing as well, showing both of our protagonists' lives. There were several punctuation errors. I hope you get to correct them!
Pace of the story: 10/10
I really didn't find anything wrong with pacing, it was well-balanced!
Creativeness + Plot: 15/15
The creativity of the plot is really good. I really loved it. I have read some books with this same plot before, like one lead feeling the pain of the other lead when they get hurt or something, but this one was unique in its own way! Kudos to you, writer, for crafting such a good plot that flowed really well for me while reading.
I could imagine each scene of the story well. I really loved it. It felt like you had everything planned out before writing it, as it went so smoothly!
Writing style: 9.5/10
The writing style is pretty good; it was so easy to understand and wasn’t too cryptic. I loved it. If only there weren't so many punctuation errors, it would have been better. But still, it’s pretty good! Good job, writer!
Grammar: 7.8/10
The grammar is actually pretty good, but it's the punctuation you need to work on. There were several issues, such as not capitalizing the characters' names, and some sentences were broken off with a full stop, which was kind of distracting for me.
It also overshadows the good writing style. So, I suggest the writer do a thorough edit of the book! It will greatly benefit you! I believe you can make it better! ^^
Interest of the story: 9.8/10
The story really hooked me. I really, really loved the unique plot of the book, and I think you have done your best to showcase everything as much as you could. If it weren't for the punctuation errors, it could have been even better. But hey, I was still very interested to get to know more about the story as I dived from one chapter to another. It was such a good reading experience for me!
Uniqueness: 5/5
I know there are a few plots like this one, but I am telling you, this outshined the others. I really loved it! It was unique on its own, and you have written it really well. Amajin work! ;)
Total: 84/90
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