Hi Thank u. PLEASE DON'T HATE ME 🙏🌷This will be a long part written with love n sweat 😄😂.

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Recap; Suraj n Chakor celebrate with the villagers on their special moment if remarriage Ajay interrupt. Suraj n Ajay had a fight in which Suraj wins. Suraj announced that from Monday on they will work in the factory. Ranjana n KN r on something while Ragini n Ranvijay have their own plans.

Chakor n Suraj were alone every1 left them. Teju n Bijli walked home earlier. Chakor wanted to stay a little bit longer after a long time she got her parents back n wanted to spend more time with them. Suraj didn't moved from her side this Ajay could come anytime again.

Chakor was looking at Suraj. Chakor; Suraj... he turned to her Ya was all he said she hugged him. Suraj appreciated it n hugged her back. Chakor took his hand in hers n was walking with him home. In the middle of night a drop of water fall. Chakor looked up to the sky Suraj followed her glare n asked her what's up there? 🌧 another drop this time it felt on Suraj face. Suraj; Oh no it's gonna rain let's hurry. Suraj was abt to run home but she stopped him. Suraj; if we got wet we will caught a cold. Chakor; Suraj I love rain n I never get cold. Suraj; but I do. Chakor made a face n Suraj couldn't bear it Fine we will stay a bit in the rain. Chakor 😊😀. The rain started with a few drops which turned to more n more Chakor was happy n spinning  around while Suraj was freezing n hiding under a tree. Chakor; Suraj come it's so amazing. Suraj; no no Chakor I'm fine here u enjoy. Chakor made a bowl with her hands she collect the wster n splashed the water on Suraj face. Suraj runs behind her to give it her back she slipped backwards n Suraj caught. Suraj looked her deep in her eyes. Chakor blushed n runs away. Suraj followed her n they reached home.

Chakor; psst looks like every1 is sleeping. Suraj; so what it's my house. Chakor; Suraj u r too much. Suraj; what u mean I'm tolerating all of them u should be proud of me. Chakor; uff yeah I'm u did great.
Suraj smiled both went to their room silently.

Chakor took out some clothes to change she gave Suraj some clean n dry clothes to wear. Both changed n Suraj made her lie on the bed but this time Chakor didn't let him go. Chakor; Suraj now u can sleep here next to me?. Suraj; smiled n nodded yeah I can. Chakor; smiled back then please stay here. Suraj comes next to her both were lying on the bed Suraj on the left side n Chakor on the right side. Chakor looked at him deep in his eyes they had an eyelock moment like before. Suraj head was resting on his lower arm Chakor took this arm n folded her fingers into his hand their hands were into each other n they didn't lost the eye contact. Suraj comes closer to Chakor who did the same their forehead meets n both closed their eyes n felt asleep.

On the next morning Chakor woke up earlier than Suraj she safely checked on everything n felt a headache. She thought of Suraj words yesterday that she could caught a cold... maybe she did. Suraj was still sleeping while Chakor was down stairs she saw Teju preparing the food n walked into the kitchen. Teju; Chakor gud morning. Chakor wished her a gud morning too both prepared the breakfast. Chakor head was still pounding.

Suraj n the others came down for breakfast. Suraj looked around ON n Ranjana were missing n Ajay was gone forever.

Suraj - where r they n what r they planning? -.

Chakor served the food to Suraj n Teju the others took the food on their own. Chakor was eating but not much she wasn't feeling gud. Teju; Chakor beta is everything fine? Chakor; ya Teju maa it's nothing. Suraj; no Chakor don't lie there is something wrong with u. Chakor; no it's nothing it's just my head. Suraj; I told u not to play in the rain see now u caught a cold. Chakor; Suraj please don't blame me. Sorry next time I will listen to u. Suraj; it's ok. Have some juice u got some vitamins. Chakor nod n drunk the juice. She stood up but felt dizzy she lost her balance n was falling but Suraj caught her. Suraj; Chakor he was trying to wake her but she was unconscious. Teju; Suraj take her to the room I will call a doctor. Suraj nodded m lift her to their bed room he carefully lied her down on the bed n was waiting of the arrival of the doctor. At the same time ON n Ranjana returned.

The doctor came n Teju lead him to Sukor's bedroom. Suraj was tensed her stroke her head n hold hand tight. Teju knocked the door. Suraj; com'in. Teju; Suraj this the... Suraj; Doctor there is something wrong with my wife I think she got flu I told her not to play in the rain. The doctor; let me task a look please give me some space. Suraj nodded n moved aside but was still near her. The doctor made the check-up while Chakor gains conscious. Suraj was first name on her lips he immidiately goes back n hold her hand. Chakor I'm here. Chakor opens the eyes n Suraj was hold her hand again. The doctor is here to make some check-ups I told u not play in the rain. Chakor made a sad face n nodded.

Suraj looked at the doctor who was packing his stuff. Suraj; y r u leaving u hardly checked her. The doctor; she is absolutely fine. Chakor; I am but my head n this dizzy feeling I have. What is this? The doctor; Mrs. Rajvanshi u r pregnant congratulation. Suraj n Chakor were shocked both looked at each other n were speechless. The full family was listening through the door. Chakor is pregnant....😮.

The doctor left them alone n Chakor was holding her belly. Suraj was still searching for the right words. Chakor; do u wanna feel?. Suraj eyes were filled up with tears he doesn't know if it of not the child Imli carried was his but he regretted not have touched her belly. Suraj nodded he hesitated n with alot of care he touched her belly. Chakor took Suraj hand which resting on her belly n folded her fingers into his hand. Suraj; Thank u. Chakor; for what. Suraj; filling my death life with joy n happiness.

All members were send away from Teju no1 should disturb them. KN n Ranjana were in their room. Ranjana; Chakor is pregnant I can't believe this. KN; he is a Rajvanshi what u thought that he won't do it tightly. Ranjana; Kamal ji I didn't mean that. KN; the heir of Rajvanshi is growing in that Chipkali {lizard}. Ranjana; so what. KN; it's the first successor. Ranjana; u r forgetting Imli... KN; stopped her don't take her name she is good for nothing. At least Chakor is famous n she didn't kill her own child.

Imli was shattered she couldn't hold herself back n enters the room of Sukor in tears. Chakor n Suraj get shocked seeing her; Imli! they shout. Imli; cryied n sniffed Chakor u won't stay happy this is a Child of sin u can't stay happy while I. suffering of losing my child n the ability to become a mother. Suraj; Imli! how dare u! Chakor holds his hand she shook her head n stopped him. Chakor understood the pain she couldn't imagine but now she clearly can. Vivaan enters the room too n looked at Imli who sunk on her knees still crying. It melt the heart of Vivaan who took her in his arms. Vivaan; didn't u hear a Child of sin u should abort it. Com'on Imli let's go. Vivaan took her out. Sukor; wait we won't listen to u but u listen to us carefully it's our child.

Chakor n Suraj were looking at each other Suraj; y u stopped me. Chakor; it's her way to work on this to process the lost I can understand her feeling n her hurt. Suraj; but we didn't kill it. Chakor; no, we didn't. Chakor wants to stood up but Suraj refused. Suraj; If u want something tell me or some1 else but u won't move. Chakor nodded.

Teju prepared food for Chakor. Suraj.... Suraj uff this boy? sometimes he is just out of this world. Suraj heard her but he was busy. Teju comes out into the garden. Suraj what r u doing here? Suraj; mom I'm plucking some flowers for Chakor. Teju; Oh that's nice. Suraj smiled I'm sure she will like it. Teju; yes.

Chakor was waiting very long n her stomach was screaming. Uff I'm starving where is Suraj? Chakor stood up it won't be that bad if I go n look for some food. 😊. Chakor was walking out of the room hmm where r all? She looked around it was dark no1 was to see. She made her way downstairs suddenly she felt a push Chakor screamed Imlu....!!!.

Suraj n Teju runs in to see Chakor lying on the floor unconscious. Suraj n Teju; Chakor!!!. Suraj runs to her n tried to wake her all comes out n bcz Chakor screamed Imlis name all where suspecting her. Teky; get a car we have to drive her to the hospital. Suraj; ya. He lifts her up n carried her to the car n drive her to the next hospital.

Suraj reached the hospital with Chakor. Suraj saw a male nurse. Sir my wife. The male nurse; what happen to her. Suraj explains that she is pregnant slipped from the stairs. He immidiately call the doctor n get a
stretcher for Chakor.

Suraj was still holding her but a nurse told him he can't follow to the operation theatre. Suraj stopped infront of the doors n waited. The doctor come out. Mr. Rajvanshi ur wife state is very critical what should we do?. Suraj looked at the doctor. U r the doctor u tell me what u can do. The doctor; we can't safe both. But we can definitely save ur wife but we need ur permission. Suraj; what... ya save her. Suraj fall on the ground n cried. Chakors operation took place her head injury was critical but she got save the bad side of the story she a miscarriage...

Suraj was kneeling next to her bed. Please Chakor open ur eyes I can't live without u. He holded her hand caresses her head very carefully. The doctor come in. Mr. Rajvanshi. He put his hand Suraj shoulder. Suraj looked up with red eyes. The doctor; Ur wife is now out of danger but she is in a kind of shook coma it will take her some time to regain her conscious but she will be fine. Suraj; was scared to asked but he touched her belly n asked n the baby. The doctor... Teju comes in. Suraj Chakor. Suraj; only said maa n started crying.

Suraj stayed the night at the hospital with Chakor. On the next morning Suraj asked the nurse to call the doctor. The doctor come in. Mr. Rajvanshi what happen? Suraj; can i take her home? He thought a moment n agreed she needs lots of care n love n I think at home she will get it all. Suraj thanked him. He lift her up n carried her home.

Suraj parked the car. - I don't know was this but I make sure the person won't be live for long -. Suraj carefully took her out of the car n lift her again. Chakor was still unconscious.

Ranjana; Kamal ji what is this n y u bought. KN; this is a rattle I bought it for my new heir of Rajvanshi. Ranjana; new heir what r u saying. She lost the child. KN; I know she did lost it n the child died n so did died my plan to get some limelight of her fame. Ranjana; Haan now we can't use it to gain the power back. KN; it was perfect but this unlucky person Imli ruins every1's happiness. Ranjana got irritated but she saw Suraj reflection on the window n understood Haan this Imli always creats problem it's gud if she dies. KN; Haan she killed the heir twice!!!.

Suraj wasn't really listening he understood one thing - so their plan was to use Chakors fame of course Ranjana knew how Chakor earn all the money 😡 -.

Suraj carefully put her on the bed n caresses her cheek he kissed her forehead n left her alone putting the blanket on her.

Suraj; Imli!!! he shout where r u come out. Imli comes with no fear she standing I front of him. Suraj aimed the gun on her. Imli stepped back in shock but didn't say a word her body was shaking still she didn't say anything. Suraj; y? Imli y??? tell me y u did this?!. Imli comes closer to him.

KN n Ranjana were looking for it they were hiding n happy to see Imli in this situation.

Suraj; Imli y?. Imli has lost her voice but her eyes said alot. Suraj took her hand n pull her out of the house. He throw her out. Imli stood up n was confused she was still alive Suraj wasn't pointing with him at her. Suraj; I know u suffered the pain for losing a Child u won't nor u will let any1 else to go through the same pain. I won't kill u bcz I know how much ur Di loves u n if I kill u she won't forgive me ever. But right now I can't trust any1 so it's better for u to leave. Imli breaks down. Suraj how is she? Will she get fine? does she really lost the child? I'm so sorry for everything. She was pleading infront of him but Suraj didn't care. Suraj; Imli, leave n don't comeback. Imli; I lost everything where should I go?. Suraj; I don't know n I don't care. He gives a warning shoot n Imli left.

Suraj comes in back. KN; I think he killed her. Ranjana - finally this uneducated girl is out of the life of my son -. Vivaan heard the gun shoot n comes running. Imli? he shout in panic. Ranjana; Vivaan after what she did do u really think Suraj would let her live?. Vivaan went to Suraj n hold his collar. Suraj; get ur hands off me now!!! Suraj shout n this was the shout every1 was scared of. KN stepped back. Vivaan; I will kill u Suraj Rajvanshi he took out a gun n aimed on Suraj. Vivaans hand was shaking n Suraj smirked what u want to shoot me. First learn how to hold this gun properly. Vivaan; Suraj! his sweat was flowing on his face n the panic was increasing. Suraj comes closer n took Vivaans gun on his chest. Suraj; u want to shoot me do it shoot me Vivaan com'on shoot me he shout. Vivaan wasn't in his sense. Suraj; Vivaan wake up. U r losing it control enough is enough I have lost almost everything n what I can save I will.

Ranjana; didn't like the way Suraj was talking. Vivaan beta. Suraj turned n aimed the gun on Ranjana. Suraj; Mrs. KN Rajvanshi stay out of this he doesn't consider u as his mother this is a matter of family. U married my father n took him away. KN married u his mother n took u away from him. We both r on the same boat but our misunderstanding r huge which we have to sort out. Ranjana; Kamal ji say something he is insulting me n is taking My son. Suraj; Ranjana!! I told u it's a matter of family n I don't consider u neither him to be a part of it.

KN saw the fire n anger in Suraj eyes this is the one he made his ruthless son. But there was more in his eyes it was care n fear. This Suraj is changed. The Suraj KN made was ruthless n brainless never listening to his heart but follows his muscles. This Suraj is some1 new. He thinks with his brain n follows his heart. KN was quiet he knew one wrong step n a bullet will hit his head.

Suraj took Vivaan with him he shake him n asked him to come to his sense. Vivaan breaks down n started crying u killed her. Suraj slapped him. Vivaan!!!. Vivaan calmed down he looked at Suraj. Suraj; Vivaan i know alot went wrong we both suffer in pain hate n fear. But ur anger was with me with my mom with ur mom n KN what had Chakor to do with it or Imli they were innocent y u dragged them in. Vivaan; I don't know. I hated u. U took Chakor away from me n she then stayed with u. Suraj; Vivaan Imli made her decision she was in love with u. U gave her respect n cared for her n the unborn child which wasn't  urs but u loved it as urs. Vivaan; I really loved it. Suraj; ya u did but she killed it y r u crying after her. Vivaan; bcz of u. U always take things away which r close to my heart. U were always jealouse on me. Suraj; Haan I was. Ur father loved u n respected u my father just used me made a goon of me like him. Vivaan; but u enjoy it. Suraj; just bcz I was close to him. Don't u think I wanted to be a Child?. Vivaan thought. Suraj; I loved to spend time with my mummy but dad forbid me just bad he wanted a slave not a sin. But Vivaan y didn't u give me a hand u played with all but not with in our Childhood. Vivaan; ya ur mom don't u think I would have loved it to spend time with my mom. But unfortunately ur father took her away n ur mother ruined my teenage time. Suraj turned n plead infront of him. I'm sorry for that. Vivaan was moving back he felt a inner emptiness which was filling with a feeling of shame n love. Vivaan; plead too u r the older one n ask for forgiveness I'm just the younger one can u forgive me?. Suraj nodded n took him in his arm.

Vivaan was crying he lost everything. Suraj; Vivaan please control urself.
Vivaan; I love her. Suraj; I know u do. Vivaan; then y u killed her. Suraj; no I didn't. Vivaan; what... he sniffed where is she?. Suraj; listen to me...

Suraj n Vivaan come out. Vivaan went to his room. Suraj was back at his room.

Flashback;

Imli; where should I go. Suraj; I don't know n I don't care. A gun shoot. Suraj called some1 it was Bijli. Imli was confused. But Suraj explains her go with her Bijli take her along with u n bring her to Chagan he will keep her save trust I talk to him. Imli; Suraj... Suraj shook his head u r Chakors heartbeat n she is mine go no1 should get to know of it. Imli; but...  Suraj; I know u didn't do that y would u. Imli was crying she shout my name. Suraj; she was remembering u not blaming u. Bijli; go n take along with u be careful. Bijli nodded n took Imli with her.

Vivaan; where is she... Suraj; listen right now u have to play the game that u hate her she save I send her with Bijli to Chagans place.  Vivaan; Chagan. Suraj; Haan Chagan her maai Baapu r staying in the near. Vivaan; I failed I fall so low... Suraj; all is fine nothing is ruined yet. Vivaan; the homes I destroyed... Suraj; we will built new ones 😊. Vivaan; Suraj thank u. Suraj; just help me. Vivaan nodded.

The real reason for my acts is the safety of my wife n my child whoever is trying to kill it I won't spare them. Chakor please forgive me I will have to lie to u to safe the life in u. Vivaan n Imli lost a Child they would never do that even then when Imki curse us she didn't was looking at us she was more talking to herself n Vivaan talked abt abortion but he too didn't looked at us he watch to the ground n didn't face us. He was ashamed n Imli was hurt. I trust them they haven't done it KN n Ranjana wanted to use Chakor n the child y killing it... remains Ragini n Ranvijay the leftovers ... 😠.

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