Hi dear friends

I have a problem the story is very smooth going no downs only ups which is gud on one side but also boring on the otherside...

In my opinion the story needs a crack/ break or else it will end soon in the marriage of them... which is obviously the main plot but I don't know if u want it so soon?

Now I need help I'm sure u won't like my idea but to extend the story n give it a refreshing change it has to be done or the story will end soon...

I will give u now 3 options the main plot is the Break-Up of Sukor! but the reason for their break up is open n u can choose of these 3 options.

1. Family pressure (Chakors family r against her relationship!).

2. A big fight (the decision of tge kids wellbeing... Chakor is trying her best but Suraj blocks her as she is not their real mother)

3. Jealousy (Chakor is still a student n is attending the university in which a some students who likes Chakor n they r befriended...)

So guys if u don't want the break then I'm sorry but I think like I said my opinion it is just too smooth going...

Please help me n give kindly ur suggestion.

Thank u
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