Hey guys, I'm back with another chapter on our beloved SuKor  a.k.a. Suraj and Chakor from an Indian tv serial  named  Udaan Sapnon Ki, currently broadcasted on Colors TV...

So, let's start...

A beautiful mansion is shown, on a name plate hung on the wall we can see that It's written Mannat Mansion ( I know that u guys must be wondering, that y is Mannat instead of Malhotra? Well' that's also a mystery, which will be revealed for sure, but later).

A lady in her late 40s is seen serving tea to everyone, while a girl in her mid 20s is seen helping the lady, while a girl in her early 20s is seen playing games on her mobile phone, by resting her head on a lady's lap. While a lady in her late 65s is caressing her hair lovingly.

Lady 1 ( Sweetly)= Chakor, dear, u take a seat, I will serve them. 

Chakor's Dress 👇👇👇

Chakor ( Smiling)= No mumma, It's alright, let me help u. I dnt mind helping u, in fact I love doing house chores. So, dnt worry. In fact usit down, bcz If I'm not wrong, and yesterday u told me that,... In fact u promised me that today u won't do any house chores, so y didn't u maintained ur promise? ( Fake anger, childishly)= Mumma, this is not fair, haan! Bcz u taught us since childhood that breaking a promise is a very bad manner, then y r u breaking ur promise? (She goes near her mother, holds her from her shoulders softly and makes her sit on the sofà near her dad Vishesh Malhotra.)= Papa, plz explain her, na? I will manage all this, she needs rest, otherwise her health will detheriorate more and more, plz papa.

Vishesh ( Feeling proud on Chakor, fake anger)= Ananya, my darling, Chakor is right, u need rest... And... ( Only then he realizes what he said, embarrassed tries to cover up, as he knows Inayat's nature very well. He loves to tease the " Love Birds".)= I... I mean to say... ( Strictly)= Ananya, leave all this right now, Chakor said na that she will handle all this. Leave it immediately. ( He stands up and takes Ananya to their room for rest).

Chakor, Inayat and Natasha (ChaNatIna, bursts out in a loud laughter

Inayat ( Sits properly on the sofà and says in between her laughter)= Daadi ( Grandma), Doll   (Chakor)= U h... Heard how papa... Papa called mumma D... DARLING in front of everyone? How romantic, na? Gosh! I never knew that papa is this much romantic... ( Day dreaming)= Kaash... ( I hope)= That one day I will also get a handsome, hot, caring and... And trustworthy man in my life also...

Inayat's Dress 👇👇👇

Daadi ( Hits Inayat's head playfully)= Naughty girl, yes, one day u will also get a man or shall I say the prince of ur dreams ( Sapnon Ka Rajkumar)= Who will love u will, respect, care for u and the main thing TRUST U MORE THAN HIMSELF. But, but, but, before u It's our doll, I mean to say our Chakor's turn. Am I right, my doll?

Chakor ( Blushing, bows her head and tries hard to hide her blush, but in vain InaSha ( Inayat + Natasha, notice this, and winks at each other and says togheter)= Oh, come on doll! Now stop blushing! Otherwise that day Isn't far that u will be compared with a tomato, and If someday there will be a competition on who's more red a tomato or a person? Than u will rank 1st bcz now, in this moment u r more red than a tomato.

Chakor ( Couldn't control her blush blush session more, so she hurriedly puts the tray on the table and runs to her room, while InSha bursts out in a laughter).

... In Chakor's Room ...

Chakor closes the door at her back, and starts to breath heavily. She goes near the window and opens it. Fresh air passes through her whole body and whole room. She feels very chilled out and relaxed.

Chakor ( Thinks)= Daadi and Inayat r just too much... They always tease me regarding this matter... They very well know that I dnt want to leave my mumma and papa, but still they continuosly tease me... Anyways... What's the time? ( She sees the watch and almost shouts)= Oh, GOD, 9.00 A.M.? It's time for mumma's medicine, I should go and give her the medicine, as I know that papa must have forgot. ( She knocks before entering).

Vishesh= Come in.

Chakor= Papa, actually It's the time for mumma's medicine... So...

Vishesh ( Smiling)= Doll, I knew It that u must have came, but, today I remembered that I have to give her the medicine, so I already gave her, and yes, I'm going to office, If u need something do tell me I will send someone from my office, and he will deliver It till home.

Chakor= No papa, there's no need of It. If we need something then I will go and buy It. U dnt need to worry about all this.

Vishesh ( Pats her cheeks lovingly)= Ok, my doll! Take care, I'm going. Have a great day ahead!

Chakor= U too, bye!

Vishesh greets InaSha also.

He leaves.

Chakor  again gets busy in her house chores, while InaSha were busy in chit- chatting.

11.00 A.M.

Ananya woke up and saw that It was 11.00 A.M. She slowly slowly went outside her room and saw that InaSha were still chit-chatting, while Chakor was doing all the house chores. She felt very sad for Chakor, as she always des all the house chores, while Inayat and her granny were busy in chit- chatting about random stuff. She went near them and stood in front of them by crossing her arms around her chest, while the duo immediately stood up and made Ananya sit on the sofà.

Daadi ( Worriedly)= Ananya bahu ( DIL), y u came downstairs? U should have called me or Inayat we had came to ur room If u needed anything. Y U came outside? U need rest. Come on, go to ur room and take some rest. Come on.

Ananya ( Controlling her anger)= No, maa, there's no need of that I'm perfectly alright. Instead u tell me, y is... ( Her words got cut off by Chakor).

Chakor ( Worriedly)= Mumma, y u came out of ur room?  Mumma, u hneed rest y dnt u understand? Papa also told u na that u need rest?!? Then y dnt u want to hear me? Am I not able to do anything? Dnt I work or do something according to ur choice? Am I not worth of even ur trust? Mumma... ( She gets cut off by Ananya's words).

Ananya ( Teary eyed)= No, doll, there's nothing like ur thinking. U r a very good, honest and hardworking girl I'm not doubting on ur capacities. In fact ( Eyeing Inayat)= U r better than ur younger sister. At least u know how to make ur parents feel proud on u, and not like Inayat who always plays and chats on her mobile phone. I'm proud of u, my dear! ( She kisses her forahead and again goes to her room as her feet started to pain again).

Ananya= Dear, I'm gong to my room, as my feet are again paining. 

Chakor ( Worriedly)= Mumma, first of all, sit here and let me massage ur feet for sometime, after that I will accompany u to ur room. ( She goes into the kitchen to get some herbal mixtures).

Inayat ( Goes towards her mumma and starts massaging her feet, and says)= I'm sorry mumma, actually... I was...

Ananya ( Smiling)= It's ok, dear, I can understand. I was only teasing u and trying to make u realize that one day u also have to learn all these house chores like ur sister, bcz one day u both have to get married. And leave all this, let's forget the marriage for sometimes, GOD forbids, If someday something happens to me or...

(Inayat hurriedly stops her from speaking further, as she already knew what shye was going to say further, she puts her palm on her mother's mouth).

(Chakor comes out from the kitchen, and makes her sit and starts applying the mixtures of herbal leaves).

Chakor ( Tensed)= Mumma, ur swelling is increasing day by day. Inayat call the doctor immediately! Mumma, let me accompany u to ur room. Come, let's go. Inayat, hurry up!

Inayat= Hello, dr. Mishra, buddy, It's an emergency! m.r.s. Ananya Malhotra's feet are swelling again. Plz come fast! ( She cuts the call).

Daadi= Inayat, dear, help me in going upstairs. 

Inayat ( Tensed)= Daadi, let's go. ( She holds her hand and they slowly, slowly reach till her room.)

... In VishAnya's Room ... ( Vishesh + Ananya)

Chakor carefully makes Ananya lay on the bed, and covers her with the comforter.

Chakor ( Sits near her and starts to massage her legs and feet gently).

( Inayat comes in the room with Daadi and makes her sit on the sofà, as she hyas the same problem of Ananya of swelling on feet).

( Inayat also starts massaging her mumma's legs).

( AnSha " Ananya + Natasha" were feeling proud on their daughters, seeing their care.

Inayat ( Remembers something)= Doll, we should call papa, and inform him about this matter and... ( WShe gets cut off by Chalor's words).

Chakor ( While massaging her mother's legs and feet)= No, Shona, we shouldn't do so, or else papa will get more worrried and tensed about mumma, and then he will be unable to concentrate on his work. And... ( Only then the doorbell rings).

Inayat= I'll go and open the door. 

... Entrance  ...

Inayat opens the door and sees that the doctor has came...

Inayat ( Worriedly)= Thank GOD, dr. u have came... Mumma's feet are swelling more and more... Plz come and check her.

Dr. Mishra ( Sweetly)= Inayat, dear, I have came, na? Let me ar least check her, dnt worry, she'll be fit and fine really very soon. Come, let's go to her room.

Inayat= Yes, come.

... Inside VishAnya's Room ...

Dr. Mishra ( Greets everyone)= Namastey, Daadi . Chakor, dear, how r u?

Daadi= Namastey dear, how r u? I'm sure that Inayat called u, am I right?

Chakor= I'm fine... But plz check mumma, what has happened to her suddently?

Ananya ( Happily, sits on the bed, with the help of Chakor, as her feet were paining like H***)= Akash, u here? All of a sudden?

Akash= Ananya, relax, Inayat called me and told me about ur condition, and as soon as I heard about her condition I hurriedly came here. Anu, dear, my beloved sister, how many times do I have to tell u to take care of urself? 

( Yes, guys, Akash is Ananya's elder brother, and Shekhar also considers him as his brother. And he is InaKor's uncle, but they call him " BUDDY" or "SUPERHERO"). ( And obviously he is a doctor by profession).

He starts the check up

Akash ( After checking Ananya)= Ananya, nothing to worry, there's nothing serious, u stood and worked for too much time, that's why ur feet were aching. So, now have complete bed rest for atleast 2 weeks. No heavy works. ( Towards Inakor)= Dearies, plz do take care of her, otherwise her health will detheriorate again, ok?

InaKor= Ok, buddy!

Ananya= Thank u bhaiyya, aap... ( Thanks bro, u...).

Akash ( Fake anger)= Ananya, before being ur elder brother we r best friends, na? So, in friendship: "NI SORRY, AND NO THANK U". = And yes, ( Writes something on a paper)= Here I'm prescribing some pain killers, If the pain increases then take It 3 times a day for 1 week. Ok? Now I'm going, If u guys need anything or need any clarification regarding the medicines then call me, Ananya has got my number, but in case that I'm unabke to answer ur calls, due to my busy schedule than ( Takes out something from his pocket)= This is my card, call me on one of these numbers, ok? Bye. Namastey, Daadi.

Daadi= Namastey, beta. Be careful. And go carefully, ok?

Ananya= Ok, bye, take care.

InaKor= Bye buddy, have a great day ahead!

( He left)

Chakor= Mumma, after preparing dinner, I'll gi and buy ur medicines, ok? Inayat, can u plz help me in the kitchen?

Inayat= Ok, doll,let's go.

Daadi= If u want I can also help u. ( She stands up).

Inayat ( Understanding that her grandma is acting, in reality she is also really very lazy same as Inayat, teasingly, she winks at  her, extra sweetly)= No daadi, there's no jeed of that. If u want u can also go to ur room and take some rest. Otherwise I can accompany u till the liv9ng room and then go into the kitchen and help my doll).

Daadi ( Winks back at her, which went unnoticed by AnKor "Ananya + Chakor".)= Ok dear, as u wish. I'll stay here with my DIL, and plz give me my phone, ok?

Inayat ( Smiling)= Ok, my dear Daadi. ( To Chakor)= Doll, let's go! It's already 11.30 A.M. and remember, today we have to go to papa's office to give him his lunch. He must have forgot, but I still remember. Come, let's go. ( They both left for the kitchen).

Ananya ( In low voice)= Maa, If u want to go and have some rest, u can go. Bcz I know that ur feet will be also paining.

Daadi ( Emotionally)= Ananya, dear, how do u get to know, that how am I feeling? I mean I'm older than u, I'm more experienced than u, but still u always prove me wron by ur bravery and intelligence.

( Only then Inayat enters the room, as few minutes ago her Daadi asked her to give her the mobile phone).

Inayat ( Hurriedly)= Daadi, here's ur mobile phone. Do u need anything else?  Otherwise, I can go back into the kitchen, as I have to help my doll.

Daadi ( Seeing her concern towards her sister, as she very well knows that Inayat hates doing house chores, and If she's doing them, then only for her mumma's sake)= No dear, can u plz help me in laying down on the couch properly?

Inayat= Sure daadi. ( She makes her lay down properly and puts a hot water bottle under her feet, so that she can feel relaxed for sometime, she also covers her with a blanket, as she feels cold really very easily, being a bit old.)= Daadi, I'm going.

Ananya drifted into deep sleep, as Akash gave her some medicine, and due to their effects she slept.

While daadi played games on her mobile for sometime, after that she also fell asleep.

... In The Kitchen ... ( 12.30 P.M. )

Inayat= Doll, what should we make for papa apart from Roti and Bhindi Ki Sabzi?

Chakor ( While preparing rotis, thinks)= Hmmmmm...... ( Snaps)= Idea! We can make papa's favourite dish: Vegetable Biryani, and as sweet dish we can make Gajar Ka Halwa ( My favourite too).

Inayat= Good Idea! Let's make all this fastly, as papa always has his lunch at 2.00 P.M. and not a minute late or early of It. As he is very punctual in everything.

Chakor ( Imagines her dad's anger, and a shiver passes through her whole body, Immediately says)= No, no, no, I dnt want to face papa's anger. Let's finish our work quickly.

... In The Kitchen ... ( 1.30 P.M. )

Chakor= Finally food is ready! ( To Inayat)= Inayat, u go and get raedy, while I pack the food, ok?

Inayat= Ok doll, but be fast haan? As It's already 1.30 P.M. ( She goes)

Chakor fills the food in the tiffin and goes to get ready.

... In The Hall ... ( 1.40 P.M.)

Chakor ( To Inayat)= Inayat, have u checked If daadi and mumma are still sleeping or they woke up?

Inayat= I have checked, and I saw that they were still sleeping, so I didn't disturbed them. Come, let's go.

Inside Malhotra Industries ( 1.55 P.M.)

Chakor ( To the receptionist)= Ma'am can u plz tell me where is mr. Vishesh Malhotra's cabin?

Receptionist= Sir's cabin is on the 5th floor on the 1st left. But ma'am right now u can't meet him, as sir has strictly ordered us to not let anyone in his cabijn bcz he is bz in a meeting. If u want u can wait in the waiting area, which is over there. And ma'am have u got any appointment? Sir doesn't meet anyone without appointments.

Inayat ( With attitude)= We dnt need any appointments for meeting him, as we r his daughters Chakor and Inayat Malhotra.

Receptopnist gets shocked and scared at the same time.

Receptionist ( Scared, starts to plead them to not to teel to his boss about this incident, otherwise she will lose her job)= I... I'm sorry ma'am, I... I ser... Seriously d... Didn't k... K... Knew that u b... VBoth were mr. Mal... Malhotra's daughters. If I knew It before, I have never asked u such s... Stupid questions. I'm sorry, plz dnt tell about all yhis to my boss, ( She folds her hands in front of the),

Chakor ( Immediately holds her hands and says)= What r u doing? It's alright, It happehns. U dnt need to be sorry. If I would have been to ur place, I might have committed the same mistake. And whatever u did It was right, as It's ur duty. And dnt worry, I won't tell him anything.

Inayat ( With attitude)= But next time be careful. ( She leaves, again walking in her stupid attitude).

Chakor signs her through her eyes " Dnt worry". ( She also leaves).

The receptionist has a sigh of relief, but at the same time curses Inayat, bcz of her attitude.

InaKor reaches Vishesh's cabin. Chakor knocks...

(A voice from inside the canin says)= Come In!

InaKor enters the cabin, but r shocked to see the scene in front of them...

InaKor ( Trying to act normal)= P... Pa... Papa... U...

Vishesh ( Calmly)= Chakor, Inayat, dearies, what happened? Y r u both stammering? What happened? Come on, have a seat.

( They both sit).

Chakor ( Sweetly yet innocently)= Papa, u r free? No, dnt take mewrong, actually... The receptionist told us that u were bz in a meeting. Then what's all this?

Vishesh ( Shocked)= What? I dnt have any meetings today. Then y she... ( She is about to call her, but Chakor holds his hand and stops him.).

Chakor= Papa, It's alright, she might got confused. Papa, leave all this, have ur lunch, u might be hungry, na? Come, today we will feed u with our hands. Come Inayat. Papa, u go and get freshen up, while we arrange the food, ok?

Vishesh ( Folding her hands in front of them , playfully says)= Ok meri maa ( Ok my mom. He goes to the toilet).

... After 10 Minutes ...

Vishesh wipes his hands with the towel and sits on his chair

Chakor feeds him the first bite

Chakor ( Excitedly)= How's the food, papa? Did u like It?

Vishesh ( It's really very yummy!

... After Few Minutes ...

Inayat= Papa, now we r leaving. Take care...

Vishesh= U too my princesses.

... On The Road ...

Inayat ( Shouts)= Auto! Auto! Taxi!

Chakor ( While wiping her sweat)= No one wants to make us sit.

Inayat= U r right. ( Again shouts)= Auto! U cheapsters, If u dnt want to make the passengers sit, then y the H*** u become auto drivers? ( Finally after much difficulties a brave taxi driver gives them a lift).

Inayat's phone rings

Inayat ( Seeing the ID)= Mumma's call? Hello mumma, what happened? Is everything alright, na? R u both fine?

Ananya= Inayat, dear, calm down, let me at least speak. Actually Chakor forgot to buy my medicines, and mine and ur grandma's feet are aching really very much, so can u plz buy our medicines? I think Chakor took the prescriptiuons with her, otherwise I had gone on my own for buying the medicines-

Inayat= Mumma relax, It's alright. We''l be buying the medicines in 10 minutes, as the chemist's r 10 minutes far from here, ok? U both stay at bed, otherwise ur feet's swelling will increase more and more, ok? Bye... 

Ananya = Ok, my mom... ( She cuts the call).

Chakor ( Worriedly starts to shoot her questions, while Inayat tries to hanlùdle the situation, as Chakor always panicks, whenever It's something related to her close ones)= Inayat, doll, what happened? Is everything alright? Is mumma fine? And what happened to daadi? Say something, na! Y r u staring at me like u have seen a ghost?!?

Inayat ( Crosses her arms around her chest, and says)= I will speak If u breath, or u give me a chance to speak.

Chakor ( Embarrassed, becomes more red than a tomato, whispers)= Sorry, go ahead!

Inayat= Mumma is fine, daadi also. She called me to remind u that u have to buy mumma and daadi's medicines. And have u got the prescriptions, bcz mumma told me that the prescriptions aren't athome where u left them.

Chakor ( Remembers)= Oh, yes, I took them with me when I went to get ready, before going to papa's office.

The taxi driver applies so harshly, that InaKor were about to dash with the glasses on each side of the doors.

Inayat ( Angrily shouts)= What the H***, mr.? Is this the way to stop the car? Who the H*** gave u the license?

Taxi Driver ( Angrily)= Oye madam, have some respect and shame, I'm of the age of ur father. Dnt u know how to respect elders? And I applied the brakes so harshly, bcz ( And he signs them to look outside)= Otherwise that stupid person has been dead at this time and I had been into police' custody. 

Inayat ( Trying to sort out the matter)= Doll, do one thing: u go and get mumma and daadi's medicines, while I go back home, so that i can see how r mumma and daadi, and, and, and, If there will be any kind of problem, i will surely inform u, and If u face some kind of problem do inform me, I will come as soon as possible. Ok? Take care. Bye. ( She gets off the car).

Taxi Driver= Madam, there's lots and lots of traffic, and fortunately that man moved on a side on time, so now decision is urs, If u want to stay in the taxi till the traffic jam finishes, or u want go on ur own. I dnt have any problem.

Chakor ( Thinks for a while, in mind)= What should I do? I have to buy mumma's medicines. And If I stay here in the taxi then I won't be able to buy the medicines, so It's better that I get down)= Thank u brother for driving me till here, now I will go on my own, and I apologise for my sister's behaviour, actually she has physically grown up very well, while mentally she is still a child. I'm sorry!

Taxi Driver ( Smiling)= It's ok, dear!

Chakor= How much Is it, brother?

Taxi Driver= 100 rupees.

Chakor= Here u go, thank u!

( She gets off the car and starts walking on the footpath).

Screen freezes on InaKor's tensed face

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