(yes I just posted about this on my profile)

So I was glancing at my works, specifically And In This This Fleeting Moment, and I cannot even begin to express how dissatisfied I am with the description right now. It's about my third draft of it already and it's still AWFUL. Anyone have any ideas on what I should do for it? What theme it should have? Anything??

*sighs because I should be able to come up with something clever but I caN'T*

In other news, is anyone else totally obsessed with watching Olympic Snowboarding??