The Mobster
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UshbaAnsari

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I am gob smacked. This was incredible. All of the books I've read so far in this reviewer have been great but DAMN! I remember when I first joined Wattpad and I only read Mafia books lmaoooo. This brings back a lot of memories XD

But honestly, this is amazingly written, and I love the story line. I was kind of expecting it to be a bit cliche Mafia Rom-Com, but it was stunning! Your descriptions and first person narrative are so perfectly written and so affective!

Some authors either excel in one field of writing (description, narrative, emotions ect) but you are really skilled in all! I really got inside Cami's and Kai's heads and understood their emotions. (As much of a hottie even my gay heart finds Kai, he is acting like an utter dickhead atm)

The only thing I would say to improve this book, and it's more of a personal little thing rather than any way to drastically change it, is that there are an awful lot of pictures and GIFs in there. You are such an amazing author, you don't need pictures! (I hope this doesn't sound rude btw) You don't need to get rid of them, I'm just saying you don't need them.

Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the following chapters, especially with that cliffhanger and little spoiler you kind of pulled in the A/N.

BUT YES. PEOPLE WHO READ THIS BOOK PLEASE CHECK OUT ALL OF THE BOOKS I REVIEW BUT DEFINITELY THIS ONE ITS REALLY GOOD FOR A STRAIGHT ROM COM (no offense, it's just a joke between a friend of mine and I)

Thank you for making such a cool book! I'm so looking forward to finishing it! Promise me the lead up to the ending is very juicy, very shocking, and very worthy of the ending itself