The Girls of Virtue
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Phantasmagoria00

Wow. I don't really know what I was expecting, but it was not that (and that's a good thing). But that - wow.

Your story is so original, and incredible. I love it. All of the girls are so individual and unique, and you've described them all so well.

I also love how you've created this entire world from scratch. You've described it so well, and I feel like I can visit the cemetery and Obsession's house right now.

Your character development is stunning. As I said before, each character is completely different, and I love them all, no matter how bitchy they are. Each of their personalities are described so well, and each of their defining features are really clear.

The storyline, as well, is really intriguing. You've created something really incredible here, and I'm interested to find out where you take it. I have a feeling Beginning will experience some interesting things during her time with the Girls of Virtue.

I also like the way you name each chapter. Chapter naming is always a challenge, but you've done it really, really well. Each name relates to the chapter behind it, buy never gives too much away.

So I guess that's it then! I'm excited to see where Beginning's adventures lead her, and I will definitely be reading on! Thank you for creating something so original!

P.S: Sorry for the shit review, I'm just really out of it all today