Forbidden
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OptimisticDragonfly

Can I just say that Nico Di Angelo just got a competator for my fictional baby.

First of all, can I just say that this is an absolutely wonderful book that is ready for publishing. Like, I would put this right up their with Harry Potter and Percy Jackson. This is that good.

Your character development is so stunning, I am in love with all of your characters, even Euric. You describe them so well, and always leave just enough unrevealed to keep the reader hooked and begging for more. Especially that CLIFFHANGER IN THE LAST CHAPTER I STILL HAVEN'T FORGIVEN YOU FOR

Ehem...

Your storyline is utterly flawless. From your first chapter to the last, I could find nothing wrong with the story. Your use of flashbacks is so skillful, and you wield this ability better than the guards and their swords.

Your descriptions are also ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE. I swear, I can so vividly picture every inch of the castle and the abandoned house that Ethan and Gavin stayed it.

The Order of Blood is definitely one of the more intriguing things in this story. I'm interested, and I love that you left introducing it until a while into the book. It's the perfect rebel group, and you've created it's members and their distrust of Gaven. Distrust or suspicion can be a difficult thing to portray, but you've done a great job.

Thank you so much for creating such an original and fantastic story. I'm eagerly awaiting the sequel, and I'm excited to find out about Ethan's "dreams and jazz" about Blythe.

P.S: that epilogue was the best, I swear.