Destined: A Soulmate Story
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Alycorn007

I've already commented all the spelling, grammatical and structural corrections, I just wanted to do my final review!

This book is currently unfinished, but I await the next chapter (and it's eventual completion) with great excitement. It's a well thought out piece of writing, and you follow a clear plot line that isn't too straight foreward. You're not copying someone else's idea, and I like the fact that you took a different approach to some characters beginnings, and how they met all the other Seven.

The only thing I would say to improve your writing (other than the spelling corrections) would be to try and use more sophisticated language and to vary your sentence structures.

God, I sound like an English teacher. Fuck.

Anyway, there really wasn't much I would have changed! It was great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you so much Alycorn007 for writing such an amazing book! Xx