Black Diamonds: Darkest Desires
Black Diamond: Darkest Desires
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NichelleDiamond
Wow.
This book (although only 5 chapters long - so far) is really hooking! I really want to know what happens to Josephine, Giselle, Katrina, Diamond and Adrian! Although it's short, it's really great so far!
To be honest with you, when I read the description I was a bit concerned it would end up a bit like Keeping Up with the Kardashians, (which I don't really like) but it surprised me! It's a really interesting and shocking plot line and I thoroughly enjoyed it!
You asked me to look for character development and plot holes, but really, I can't fault you on either of them! You have a well thought out story line, and you are following it really well!
I like how you don't tell us the whole situation straight away. We have to earn it, in a way. I'm intrigued as too what has happened to Josephine in the past, and the other characters' pasts as well.
I'm also delighted that there is (at least one) an LGBTQ+ character in the mix! It's just something that I like (as a member of the community myself) about the book. #representation lol
Your writing style is really cool, and I love the tantalising flashbacks and snippets of information you release.
Thank you so much for writing such an interesting book! I'm looking forward to reading the finished product! Xx
PS: When I read the names of the two sisters (Josephine and Giselle) I snorted because Josephine would have been my younger sisters name, and Giselle is my middle name!
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