The Good: 

1: A nice, fast pacing story.

2: The plot was compelling, which kept me reading.

3: The characters were fully developed, and I loved the main character.

4: The blurb didn't give away too much information.

5: Full of detail. The story had quite a lot of detail, making it fun to read.

The Bad: 

1: The cover. The cover didn't catch my eye at all, and if I was looking for a story, I would ignore yours, just because the cover looked a bit - boring? Change the picture, probably use a non-animated picture. The author's name should be in a darker colour (or white) 

2: Long chapters. The chapter was a bit too long, and it took me (according to Wattpad) 30 minutes. (not really, but an average person who doesn't read a lot will take that much time.) Try to make the chapters shorter, no more than 2000 words, (though under 1000 is what people usually read, but that's not important.) You can make at least 3  chapters out of one. Also, the first chapter was way too long, and as the first chapter, that shouldn't be the case.

3: The blurb. It's not giving away info, and that's good, but the blurb is too long. try to make it slightly shorter (just remove 4 lines) and add space. 

like this.

do this. start new paragraphs after some lines.

That's it!

                                                      READ THE BOOK. IT'S INTERESTING.