stay with me tonight
So this really started as a poem but now its kinda a song... oh well... i still want peoples feedback please. This is really important to me. I wrote it for someone who was important to me so its really close to my heart. Please tell me what you think?
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Stay with me tonight
my head on your chest under the moonlight
we'll gaze at the stars
you'll make it right, you have so far.
Because no one understands
the beat of my heart under touch of your hand
the feel of your breath
cold and soft on my warm neck.
Let's walk through the woods and understand
that nothing feels more right that the feel of your hand
around me, hold me, love me,
and show me you can.
Stay with me tonight
my head on your chest under the moonlight
we'll gaze at the stars
you'll make it right, you have so far.
You know I can't escape
you running through my mind day after day,
the pull you have on me
our loves stronger than earth's gravity.
Look between the trees and beg don't go
please stay with me, don't let me know
how it feels like to break my heart
losing you I'm lost in the dark.
Look down the path,
now where have you gone.
Don't run so fast,
please make me strong
to live this mortal life
without you I just can't survive.
So stay with me tonight
my head on you chest under the moonlight
we'll gaze at the stars
you'll make it right, you have so far.
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