Rule Remider:

Two chapters of The Prime Book: and have one DETAILED comment on EACH chapter on what you like and what should be improved.

- Respect the feedback number

- Effort Book is decided by the author as the best commenter this week and will receive a ONE chapter critique of their choice.

salonikavale's choice:

LunarsFantasies

Prime Book: Finnegan Lynch and the Lunar Pearl by letusfallup

Critique Number: 5

Chapters: 2 & 3

Effort Book: Escape with a Journey by LunarsFantasies

Critique Number: 4

Chosen Chapter: Chapter 1

Due Date: Wedensday 21st September 9pm GMT