Rule Reminder:

- Read the TWO chosen chapters of The Prime Book: Searching for the Stars and have one DETAILED comment on EACH chapter on what you like and what should be improved.

- Respect the feedback number

- Effort Book is decided by the author as the best commenter this week and will receive a ONE chapter critique of their choice.

@AverageAntiheroine's choice: @MegMerriet

Congrats! :)

Prime Book: Searching for the Stars

Critique Number: 5

Chapters: Episode 1 Part 1 & 2

Effort Book: Sky Song

Critique Number: 3

Chosen Chapter: Chapter 3 - Pirate of the Mountain Mist

Due Date: Monday : 6th June 9pm GMT