Rule Reminder:

- Read the TWO chosen chapters of The Prime Book: and have one DETAILED comment on EACH chapter on what you like and what should be improved.

- Respect the feedback number

- Effort Book is decided by the author as the best commenter this week and will receive a ONE chapter critique of their choice.

@druidrose's choice: @salonikavale

Prime Book: Marigold by hunterdsmith

Critique Number: 5

Chapters: 1 & 2

Effort Book: The Phrontistery by @salonikavale

Critique Number: 4

Chosen Chapter: Chapter 15 - Stickler

Due Date: Wednesday 3rd August 9pm GMT