Rule Remider:

Two chapters of The Prime Book: and have one DETAILED comment on EACH chapter on what you like and what should be improved.

- Respect the feedback number

- Effort Book is decided by the author as the best commenter this week and will receive a ONE chapter critique of their choice.

majorsilver99's choice: RyanP978

Prime Book: The Phrontistery by salonikavale

Critique Number: 4

Chapters: 1 & 2

Effort Book: Ragnarok by RyanP978

Critique Number: 3

Chosen Chapter: Chapter 24

Due Date: Thursday 8th September 9pm GMT