Rule Reminder:

- Read the TWO chosen chapters of The Prime Book: and have one DETAILED comment on EACH chapter on what you like and what should be improved.

- Respect the feedback number

- Effort Book is decided by the author as the best commenter this week and will receive a ONE chapter critique of their choice.

@DandelionRebellion's choice: MegMerriet

Prime Book: Two Thousand Years by druidrose

Critique Number: 3

Chapters: Chapter 2 + 3

Effort Book: Sky Song Scherzo

Critique Number: 3

Chosen Chapter: Chapter XX - Treasure Hunting

Due Date: Wedensday 20th July 9pm GMT