Rule Reminder:

- Read the TWO chosen chapters of The Prime Book: The Zero Hour by @xtoverus and have one DETAILED comment on EACH chapter on what you like and what should be improved.

- Respect the feedback number

- Effort Book is decided by the author as the best commenter this week and will receive a ONE chapter critique of their choice.

@MatiDemers choice: @RyanP978

Congrats! :)

Prime Book: The Zero Hour

Critique Number: 4

Chapters: Chapter 1, Part 1 and 2

Effort Book: Ragnarok

Critique Number: 4

Chosen Chapter: Chapter 18

Due Date: Monday 2nd May: 9pm GMT

(I live in the UK, so yeah.)