🌟YOUNG ADULT/ROMANCE🌟WINNERS🌟
JUDGE: rebel_imperfect Stariewrites Where_Souls_Roam
FIRST PRIZE:
Shock Waves by abbyapple9878 (72/80)
Title: 8/10. Short and straight to the point, but draws readers interesting.
Cover: 9/10. Beautiful, aesthetically pleasing, but also simple and not too much.
Blurb: 10/10. It's interesting enough to draw readers in, but also short enough that they don't get bored.
Plot: 14/15. It's a great plot, and it develops beautifully, no confusing time skips and loop holes. It's also original.
Character development: 13/15. Great characters, very realistic and unique.
Grammar: 14/15. Very good job. Hardly noticed any errors, but rereading would still help little.
Personal enjoyment: 4/5.
A great fictional work. The writer is very talented and she is telling a beautiful story, and taking readers along on the journey.
SECOND PRIZE:
Falling for my enemy by turkey222 (68/80)
Title: 8/10. Perfectly sums up the story, a bit too much. No room for suspense, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Cover: 9/10. Beautiful and simple.
Blurb: 9/10. Like the title, it tells us exactly what to expect from the story, and that encourages readers to read.
Plot: 13/15. It's just a little bit wattpad cliché, but again that's not a bad thing when it's done right, and this writer is doing it right. I've only read four chapters but I'm enjoying it already.
Characters: 14/15. Very well written, realistic, unique personalities.
Grammar: 12/15. Only minor spelling and punctuation issues to fix.
Personal enjoyment: 3/5
Interesting plot, the writer has a very hilarious writing style that keeps readers smiling and eager for more.
THIRD PRIZE:
Making her mine by gulle_Jana (65/80)
Book title ( 9/10) Honestly saying the Book name pulls the readers who have romantic taste because the name explains it all.
Book cover ( 8/10) And even the cover is catchy.
Blurb( 9/10) And the blurb is giving exciting thoughts on how she falls for him.
Plot (12/15) Even though the plot is like any other common mafia story, the way she has written it gives a exciting glint to it.
Character development ( 12/15)
Grammar( 12/15)
Personal enjoyment ( 3/5)
And there is not that much of a grammatical mistakes, so yeah! The is book awesome all in all.
🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟
🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟
🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟
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