🌟TEEN FICTION🌟WINNERS🌟
JUDGE: HalloItsMe137 & PrincessDia12
FIRST PRIZE:
BROKEN by DTitan7 with 76/80
Book Title: 7/10
Book Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 14/15
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 14/15
Grammar: 14/15
Personal Enjoyment: 5/5
Review: Beautiful book cover; it really corresponds to the title of your book. Your blurb is interesting and is able to hook readers into reading your book. I like how the humor you add into your stories make it more enjoyable to read. Minimal grammatical mistakes and the plot has been well-worked on. Keep up the good work!
SECOND PRIZE:
MY OTHERHALF by Azmeya_ with 74/80
Book Title: 8/10
Book Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 13/15
Plot: 12/15
Character Development: 14/15
Grammar: 13/15
Personal Enjoyment: 5/5
Review: Book cover is beautiful, it looks more of Romance than Teen fiction. Splendid blurb, I love the friendship and the cliffhangers you use in your story. The humor in your story is very noticeable and enjoyable at the same time. Character development has been noted and the use of irony/sarcasm - well used ;). Your story is enjoyable and you have no issues with grammatical mistakes. Personally, your book is something worth to read.
THIRD PRIZE:
We have two winners,
The Hoodie girl by XX_Flying_Pandas_XX with 68/80
Book Title: 9/10
Book Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 12/15
Character Development: 12/15
Grammar: 14/15
Personal Enjoyment: 4/5
Review: I love your vector book cover, it is surely attractive. The story appears cliche however the writer uses her own twists and turns to make the story outcome amazing. I also loved the cliffhangers at the end of some of your chapters especially chapter 1. There are no issues to do with grammar. Just avoid the repetitive use of "I", other than that, your book is appealing to readers.
From the Perspective of a Player by plainly_leemah with 68/80
Book Title: 6/10
Book Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 13/15
Character Development: 14/15
Grammar: 14/15
Personal Enjoyment: 4/5
Short Review: Your story title seems a bit too long. The book cover is really attractive and eye-catchy as well. You work well with both past and present tense. No issues to do with grammar and your story flows well. Well done!
🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟
🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟
🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟
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