🌟HORROR/PARANORMAL🌟WINNERS🌟
JUDGE: the-muslim
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FIRST PRIZE:
Skeleton beat the Clock by Amaboo (73/80)
Cover - 7 / 10 It's simple and doesn't attract you
Title -9/10 The title is catchy and attracts the readers
Blurb 10/10 The blurb is very interesting Plot - 14/15 The Plot is well-structured and really creative
Character development 14/15 All of the Character traits are each of them description is good
Grammar 15/15 not any mistakes
Personal enjoyment 4/5 liked it , it was really good
Review - Thus novel really has a good description, the characters are very well described from the start of the novel so into the novel that you don't want to stop reading
SECOND PRIZE:
BUG BITES by RaghavBhatia7 (72/80)
Title 8/10 It sparks curiosity in you
Cover 8/10 The book cover attracts the reader and the written line about ghosts gives you a feeling about what the story is going to be
Blurb - 10/10 It sparks curiosity in you and the description is really good
Plot - 14/15 the idea of a ghost visiting and guiding the boy is really creative and the boy is going through bullying and having to listen to his parents fight .
Character Development 13/15 Avish character traits are shown ho he is scared of his father for the but the characters need to be shown a bit more
Grammar :15/15 not a single mistake
Personal enjoyment I enjoyed the story it was really captivating
Review- the story is really world written the description, vocabulary is perfect all the all the reading I felt goosebumps and some few lines like in the third chapter "you need to be taught a lesson " were sending shivers
THIRD PRIZE:
We have two winners,
Rest in Peace by xvpizzalov (70/80)
Cover: 9/10 It attracts you
Title : 8/10 attracts up and sparks curiosity
Blurb- 9/10 The blurb is really to the point and attracts you
Plot-13 /15 The plot is okay of a girl finding out that she can see ghosts after been shot anots after she has
Character Development.- 13 /15 The main lead character from the beginning is developed that house has sarcastic replies and how she is mature has comebacks
Grammar -15/15 I didn't find any mistakes everything Was perfect
Personal enjoyment -3/5 I liked it it was okay
Review- The book from the start expresses the character and how she is mature after the death of her mother. The plot is good and my most favourite thing is the girl's sarcasm even when she is being held at gunpoint and she doesn't fail to be sarcastic
Silent Promise by ivishlavender (70/80)
Title : 8/10 It's catchy but there are a few books that have the same title
Cover : 8/10 The cover is good
Blurb : 9 /10 The blurb is really good and it attracts the reader
Plot : 13/15 The plot is well structured but I didn't find it that original
Character Development 14/15 You are handling the povs of every character very well their reactions , thoughts each thing is describe fantastically
Grammar 15/15 Everything is good: your sentence structure , spelling .
Personal enjoyment I liked it
Review : this book is really well written how are you are handling each character pov is awesome and your description of what's happening is fantastic
🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟
🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟
🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟
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