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🌟HORROR/PARANORMAL🌟WINNERS🌟

JUDGE: the-muslim

Notice to all readers:I do apologize but due to some recent comments, I'm forced to create this new rule.Any offensive comments against the host, judge or the participants will be deleted immediately. Not to sound harsh, but if you do have anything against the judgement, I suggest either you pull out your book or if you are a reader, to quit reading.All the judges have worked so hard to judge you book and to give you their honest judgement, so please take them into consideration and respect their hard work.


FIRST PRIZE:

Skeleton beat the Clock  by Amaboo (73/80)

Cover - 7 / 10 It's simple and doesn't attract you 

Title -9/10 The title is catchy and attracts the readers

Blurb 10/10 The blurb is very interesting Plot - 14/15 The Plot is well-structured and really creative 

Character development 14/15 All of the Character traits are each of them description is good

Grammar 15/15 not any mistakes

  Personal enjoyment 4/5 liked it , it was really good 

Review - Thus novel really has a good description, the characters are very well described from the start of the novel so into the novel that you don't want to stop reading 


SECOND PRIZE:

BUG BITES by RaghavBhatia7 (72/80)

Title 8/10 It sparks curiosity in you 

Cover 8/10 The book cover attracts the reader and the written line about ghosts gives you a feeling about what the story is going to be

Blurb - 10/10 It sparks curiosity in you and the description is really good

Plot - 14/15 the idea of a ghost visiting and guiding the boy is really creative and the boy is going through bullying and having to listen to his parents fight .

Character Development 13/15 Avish character traits are shown ho he is scared of his father for the but the characters need to be shown a bit more

Grammar :15/15 not a single mistake 

Personal enjoyment I enjoyed the story it was really captivating

Review- the story is really world written the description, vocabulary is perfect all the all the reading I felt goosebumps and some few lines like in the third chapter "you need to be taught a lesson " were sending shivers 


THIRD PRIZE:

We have two winners,

Rest in Peace by xvpizzalov (70/80) 

Cover: 9/10 It attracts you

Title : 8/10 attracts up and sparks curiosity 

Blurb- 9/10 The blurb is really to the point and attracts you

  Plot-13 /15 The plot is okay of a girl finding out that she can see ghosts after been shot anots after she has

Character Development.- 13 /15 The main lead character from the beginning is developed that house has sarcastic replies and how she is mature has comebacks 

Grammar -15/15 I didn't find any mistakes everything Was perfect

Personal enjoyment -3/5 I liked it it was okay 

 
Review- The book from the start expresses the character and how she is mature after the death of her mother. The plot is good and my most favourite thing is the girl's sarcasm even when she is being held at gunpoint and she doesn't fail to be sarcastic 


Silent Promise by ivishlavender  (70/80)

Title : 8/10 It's catchy but there are a few books that have the same title 

Cover : 8/10 The cover is good

  Blurb : 9 /10 The blurb is really good and it attracts the reader 

Plot : 13/15 The plot is well structured but I didn't find it that original 

  Character Development 14/15 You are handling the povs of every character very well their reactions , thoughts each thing is describe fantastically 

Grammar 15/15 Everything is good: your sentence structure , spelling .

Personal enjoyment I liked it

Review : this book is really well written how are you are handling each character pov is awesome and your description of what's happening is fantastic


🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟

🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟

🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟

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