JUDGE: Why_Is_The_Sky_Black

FIRST PRIZE:

The 65th Hunger Games by RayneBeckham (74/80)

Title- 10/10 As a Hunger Games fan I easily got excited when I read the title. 

Cover- 8/10 Is attractive but I wish it could be better.

Blurb- 9/10 Great description I love the inclusion of references to the Hunger Games books 

Character Development- 14/15 Great characters! Finnick is displayed so we all could love him as much as we all did in the books! 

Grammar- 14/15 Hardly any mistakes, some paragraphs are lengthy so consider shortening them! 

Plot- 15/15 Love the plot and mere concept of having this book spotlight Finnick. Always interesting me more every chapter! 

Personal Enjoyment- 4/5 Loved it! Amazing writing made me love every chapter!

Review-A great Hunger Games fanfic. Such great writing from the author makes everything more real and capturing.

SECOND PRIZE:

Shunned by Where_Souls_Roam (72/80)

Title- 9/10 Interesting. The word is capturing.

Cover- 8/10 Not that eye-catching. It's actually hard to see what the cover image is.

Blurb- 9/10 It was detailed in a good amount and made me crave for the next chapter. 

Plot- 14/15 Definitely not cliche. Very unique idea and progression.

Character development- 14/15 With the characters having unique personalities and being new to these events they grow marvelously. 

Grammar- 13/15 Common mistakes like comma placements. 

Personal Enjoyment- 5/5 The writing has this sarcasm and sass that I appreciated. 

Review-Shunned is an excellent book! The plot and mere idea is very different and not cliche which is difficult to find in fan fictions. Hephaestus (/Andy) is a person who had 'power' but was mocked, to see him grow and develop into a 'mortal' was very interesting. It is evident that the author worked hard. Fixing some grammar mistakes is needed!

THIRD PRIZE:

Αιώνια: The Eternal by Alaina1705 (71/80)

Title- 9/10 Sounds amazing and captures people's attention!

Cover- 8/10 The cartoon look great and contrasts with the title

Blurb- 9/10 The utter randomness made gives a sense of curiosity.

Character Development- 13/15 Characters are unique yet need more building.

Grammar-14/15 Great grammar, although, some phrases don't make sense.

Plot- 14/15 Interesting! I absolutely love the direction taken.

Personal Enjoyment- 4/5 I'm not a HUGE fan of BTS but I enjoyed this a lot. 

Review-True to the author's word, the story can be appreciated by both BTS haters and soldiers in their Army [(?) Don't really know the correct phrase!] I like the flexibility of it, it's very unusual and original so I loved that! A great story! 

🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟

🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟

🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟

Participants,please inline comment here your book's name and I will reply your marks and the review.

Winners please PM me your gmail for the sticker.