JUDGE: AngelaHashmi

FIRST PRIZE:

The Mission | ONC 2020 by KavyaAgnihotri with 73 out of 80

Title: (8 /10) Yes it's kind of intriguing but common. Makes me want to read it.

Book cover: (9/10) It's appealing and yes tells a tale with just seeing the graphic.

Blurb: (10/10) It's interesting and yes it makes me want to read further.

Plot: (14/15) The plot seems original. It's not too cliche nor too fast paced.

Character development: (14/15) Characters are interesting and they seem realistic enough to imagine.

Grammar: (14/15)

Personal enjoyment: (4/5)

Review: It's a story like no other and I took liking to it almost after reading the blurb itself. It's very interesting tale and with few cliff hangers, it can be even more interesting. Overall I enjoyed reading it.

SECOND PRIZE:

Mage Of Fire by DisneyTsumTsum2 with 72 out of 80

Title: (9/10) Interesting and makes me want to read further.

Cover: (8/10) Nice graphic. Somewhat matches the story.

Blurb: (9/10) Interesting and makes me want to read further.

Plot: (14/15) Original, not fast paced nor cliche.

Character development: (14/15) Interesting and imaginable.

Grammar: (13/15) 

Personal enjoyment: (5/5)

Review: Beautiful story. Sparked my interest by just reading the blurb but I would suggest working on the first chapter a bit more. Try to make it a little more suspenseful. Overall it was a good experience reading it.

THIRD PRIZE:

The Lady Weeping In The Mansion by BrutalRice with 71 out of 80

Title: (9/10) It's cleverly thought and sparked my curiosity right away.

Cover: (8/10) Matches with the story and it's a good graphic.

Blurb: (9/10) Yes the blurb is interesting and makes me want to read further as it looks suspenseful.

Plot: (14/15) Non cliche, original, not fast paced.

Character development: (13/15) Interesting and realistic.

Grammar: (13/15)

Personal enjoyment: (5/5)

Review: Exquisite, nice and entertaining story. There's creativity and it looks original. I would advise to use more figures of speech though since it makes the story stand out more but that's just an opinion. Overall I enjoyed reading.

🌟CONGRATULATION TO THE WINNERS🌟 

🌟TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS, YOUR BOOK IS AMAZING BUT IT NEEDS SOME IMPROVEMENT🌟

🌟KEEP ON TRYING AND ONE DAY, YOU WILL HAVE A SURPRISE🌟

Participants,please inline comment here your book's name and I will reply your marks and the review.

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