Chpater oen prouloge [[a prologue isn't a chapter really]]
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. [[ooooooo so exciting]]

"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." [[What does it mean?]]

"Its about StarKit!" [[Wow. I thought there was gonna be a cliché there. Nevermind]] A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. [[isn't the purpose of saying the pelt colour to hide the name?]] "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. [[Because nobody would ever think about the dreadful sin that is her powers]] "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."

She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. [[Always Jayfeather]]

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