Chatter NEIN Teh Evil Tigger and holY [[Don't do it, me. Don't make that connection......stop]]
I SAID NO FLAMES! YOUR JUST JELOS YOUR GOING 2 HEL LJESS IS OYUR SAVER [[This is too much]]

"Ohno its HolyLeaf!" yelled FireStra he ranned away. SandStrom wnet aftre him. [[Yes. Run away and never come back. Run and escape Starkit's spell]]

StarGlaem locked up. HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr. [[Texting.]]

"OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" [[MAH BOI TIGGER]] she hossed. [[What was that supposed to say. Hissed? It thought it said hosed]] "WHTA WIL WE DO!" [[You attacked Blackstar when he peacefully strolled into camp and when cats actually attack, you just stand around]]

"we figt." [[Inspirational words]] saud Jayfeathre and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. [[Mmhmm. How heart-wrenching because we were so attached to this "JayFather"]]

"YOU KILDED MY FTHER! [[Because you were so attached to him as clearly shown in previous chapters]] she yelled and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar. [[Tigerstar just took the blow with no struggle]]

"U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!" [[1. Firestar came back 2. Tigerstar died from an accidental attack 3. I accidentally cut myself with paper all the time and I don't get rushed to the hospital, let alone die 4. No one gonna mourn Jayfeather?]]

StarGleam was sooo happy [[Happy right after your father died]], she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way. [[Sandstorm deserves better. Firestar deserves better. No one deserves Starkit and Starkit deserves no one but the popularity of Flamenose]]

"OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM! [[You are the reason he needs saving in the first place]]

a cilf hunger1!111! see im a god riter i no what thta id thx f4r the good revweiws JzzPaw && everon else WHOSE NIT A FALMER [[I could write better as a 4th Grader on a roller-coaster. Sure, it'll be a cliché story, but I wrote 4,000 words in Gr. 4 with only mistakes of the punctuation of dialogue (which I barely understood then).]]

[[I bet at least one of you searched up 'Flamenose' because you didn't know who he was.]]