Chapter Six Desions,
STUP GLAMING!11! IF YOU'R AN FLAM,E YOUR A STNITS AND WIL BUN IN HEIKL! [[Just stop]]

LASTEST TIEM ON STARKITS PROPEHY:; [[This isn't a TV show. This is a horrible fanfiction that should bun in heikl.]]

"NO!" shitted [[It's too #muck]] SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her checks she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me….!" [[Yeah, yeah]]

Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the frost. She wus so depresedded! Hu was seh sapost to pik?/?/ Then she saw JayFethre cumin thru the forst tords her. [[Because having three toms mooning over you is sooooooo depressing]]

"JayFeathr im soooo confusedd wat do i do she yelled their are three toms atref me! TREEE!"! [[Oh no! A tree!]]

i know" sed jayFethr he locked happy. "thats good four you it menzz that p[eo[le like uo. he told he smilling. [[That sounds exactly like Jayfeather]]

"NO NUT I LUV ALL OF THEM" sed StarPaw back waling upst. "I DON'T KNO WHO TO [ICK!1!1" [[ICK at them all, it's an acronym. 'Illegally Claw and Kick' them all as they are not the real ones]]

"wel ten let me tel yo a stor.y said JayFeathern and he sat don. Onceu pon a tiem there were afew cats that I licked." [[Sure. Very believable]]

"hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. [[They were sad for being in love with this pitiful excuse for Jayfeather]]

"theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. [[That's it? No one else? None of the other ships the fandom made up? No Half Moon, maybe even Briarlight... and Stick isn't a cat]]

"OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her fathe loved a sTICK. SHE GAPD IN SHOC. [[Because that is very hurtful. Maybe you should look at Graystripe and Firestar who actually have committed relationships]]

"Wat did you do? she esked thoug cuase she was crios. [[Must have missed that biology class, huh?]]

Wel I culdn have kids with a stcik now culd i?" said JayPaw and he locked confuded. LIKE HE DIDN;T EVN KNO SHE WAS GNNA ASK THt qestn. [[I like how he asked 'could I?' as if it was possible to procreate with a stick]]

"sO YOU WENT WITH DAWNSPARKLE INSTD! [[That was a hard question indeed]] YELLED STARpaw locking vry happi. "but that doesn;t help me what am I spost to do?/? [[Reject a stick]]

"Folo youre hart said Jayfeahr. "Who do yo want to be wit/" [[ A.K.A be with the person you can have children with]]

Hmm StarPaw taught for a secund. FireStar!" she yelldd and then run of to tel him that she ;oved him [[That took an entire second]]

NO FLAMSE!1!12!1 [[Too bad]]