Holy crap guys, I did not expect this story to get so many reads! A week ago I could swear this was at 400 reads and now it's almost at 600! You guys are awesome! I think I'm about halfway through the story now. I feel like I've improved immensely on my writing. Like, if you look at the first chapter and then the most recent one it's crazy. So now, I want all of your guys' feedback. I don't care if you write me an essay. I want ALL of your thoughts. Thoughts on the plot, characters, my writing in general, everything. Who's your guys' favorite character? (They don't have to be alive) I just wanna hear everyone's feedback, whether it's good or bad.