I want y'all to tell me-
What can I do to make this Roleplay book more fun and entertaining for y'all?

Would separate chapters help?

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A separate chapter is a Roleplay between a cannon character and a OC;
A Character can choose which one they want to RP with:::::::::::

So. What do y'all think?
Would this make it more entertaining?  All I expect from y'all is to at least TRY to make it detailed-

~SKiTtLEs/tINa