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Reviews abound, and I'm glad to get one done this morning.... before I have to RACE, to my lovely, hair splitting job. So, booom...dundundunduuuun

 LET BEGIN!!!!

I enjoyed being dropped right in to the action of the girls life. Good job author, but~~~ummm, the cliché everyone loves me, and lets go through the rundown of every character and their back groud is a teensy, weensy bit tedious for instance....every single brother is hot, and has a hot mate....umm, yeah how couldn't they with this being a werewolf book and all~~~~*Nods head*Yep, the re~~~al deal right off the bat.

Go figure he's a le~Ge~END~~~!! I mean it's cool if he had a reputation, that's more of the realistic word I would use, simply put if him and Lily are the same age, and there are older werewolves out there, shouldn't others who are le~Ge~ENDS be spoken of, and he could be rising star or something, just a thought (oh, and her not liking him...is definitely something I've seen before, but it's refreshing if she stays in this mode longer than two chapters.) *Smiles*

Yeah, this author ain't half bad, no shade, she has a clear mission and I enjoy authors who don't have their story going all over the place, it's like playing hide and seek with the plot. I'm not three, I don't wa~~I'M IT~!!!

By-the-By every time I read Lacrosse I think of the sport, lol, is that only me?

You don't have to explain their playfulness, hell I'm twenty-five and my little sisters are in their twenties, and we've played in a box for the new T.V. far longer than is healthy for supposed college students. *Pouts* they took my castle at the end of it all, Le'sigh....*cough*

....HE'S HOT~???~~~! OH NO! Yeah, *rolls eyes* I know I'm reading romance, but someone out there where can I get, the uniquely hot man, whose features weren't so much handsome, as they were hard, as if carved from stone. The most attractive thing about him was his soft lips....yeah, I kinda started writing lol back to the review, lmao I can't with me people, I just can't.

Forensic Chemist....ooh, you gave this girl a real job, Kudos...and it actually matters to the story.. A plus!!

This writer does have a habit of saying the same thing twice, but in a different way, EX~: "The white rabbit is in the house, I mean it's the house where that white rabbit is." ....Umm, I get it dude, there is a rabbit in the house. I would suggest she look over her dialogue a little, moving forward (on Chapter 2, accomplishment author, you've made me swiper lol)

Cooool~~ You wrote the man's view too, I like that it's always refreshing to have two fully developed characters running around.

Ookay, so this writer does have a grasp of the human language and, it's cool that she's taken a werewolf and added the mystery that makes the werewolf part just another part of it. (Like, it's not the main focu~S, valley girl forever!)

Which is something to be said, and the werewolf guy didn't grab her up, and slam her against with a lowly growled, cliché, "MINE!".

This story is pretty legit, I expect others to judge it for themselves. THAT'S RIGHT DON'T TAKE ONLY MY WORD FOR IT. I made it to chapter two, it's morning, and I have to get to work, bu~~~T what I saw I liked, there clearly needs some grammar and some fine tuning, but the author knows this....*Stares at you hard* I hope they doo~~~ it's be weird for them to think it's perfect.

Anyway~~~! You know those days it rains,and you've read everything and there are no updates this is perfect as a "something to try" out read, plus it's actually completed which is even better. THERIANTHORPE A NEW KIND OF CURSE (BOOK 1) 

May I suggest you shorten that...it's too complicated for this site. Try "The Missing" or "The Were crimes" I understand you put thought into it, but trust me change the title so people can find it easier. Okay~~~

SYWAR Honesty OUT!!

oh, and goood morrrninng!!