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Cover: I like it, has buffy the vampire vibe.

Summary: Part 1 of A Demon Too Many: Completed (AH! So it is the first book, doesn't read like it.

If being a single curvy Dragon girl in the Mundane wasn't enough, a childhood enemy is living at my house, uninvited. My best friend wants me to be the God(s)mother Dragon of her newborn. My mother wants me to settle down with 'a male from a good lineage,' her words not mine. And I can't even get my shit together long enough to finish my painting my toes. Oh and I think someone wants to kill me. So yeah... (WOW!!! No, I'm being sarcastic, but I do like the summary has personality.)

Welcome to my [unedited] life.

Highest Ranking #273 in Paranormal July 12 2017

Part 2: Becoming the Queen of Nightmares updates once or twice a month.

*Shall we begin? Kekekekeke*


Chapter One

For a first chapter it was interesting, a lot going on. I'm a bit confused as it feels like I'm supposed to know who is who, and~ I don't. So the result while cool, I mean dragons and demons never fail to be cool. But I'm left feeling a bit lost, in this case I was dragged in with action, which is always good.

I prefer a beginning like this. I'm also happy we weren't glorifying this character. Phew! If anyone knows me, having to read three paragraphs about how amazing the mc is makes me cringe. I truly wish that would stop being a thing.

Sadly though, because there isn't a lot of info or world building in the first chapter there isn't a lot for me to comment on...soo~ On to the next one!

Chapter Two

So...I'm loving Rocco...*bats eyelashes* yep. That's really all I have to say, all that blathering about Eris had me drifting back to the fact the Rocco was sitting naked, and has an obvious addiction to pissing this little girl off.
Fun!

It pretty cool that in this universe humans and paranormal's mingle. Of course I don't really get the whole "Ambassador" this and the "Liason" that but~it's turning into something interesting.

Aside from the obviousness of Eris's statement, triggering the suspicion in Rocco all is good. (Is this part two of another novel? I can't remember. Hmm, when done I will go look back)

Onwards darlings! Onwards! Ah! did I mention my love for Liam...hmm, yeass darling we do not leave out chocolate mmmmMmmmm!

Chapter Three

That whole flash back had me dying...I am literally gagging on her jealousy. Since I write and read Romance voraciously, I can already tell Eris has a thing for Rocco, and what's hilarious is if she'd just whispered to him, or ignored him nothing would have happened.
And tears...really?! We're crying because home dude walked in with a date, whose huma ex...but if Huma wasn't tripping why are you?

...AHHH, okay I see...I've already picked a favorite *clears throat, and blinks eyes* Mmmm, that's good, that is really a good sign in the authors favor, because that means she's made me care.

Lol, but seriously Eris was tripping, (don't know the backstory) but yeah, she was mad tripping.

To their statement about disrespect...but did he really though? I mean—, from my seat he showed up with another girl, yes she look  kinda trashy, but-er-umm, did you or did you not start throwing insults first? *stares Eris down hard* that's what I thought.

LMAO I just saw a comment.... "How did he disrespect her...." Lol that's what I'm saying!!
Ann~D fade to black, *claps hands together*

Over All:

Over all this story I would probably continue reading, only because I want to see Rocco and Eris relationship move forward. Though, I don't know anything from the first book. I think Eris plays victim well....*Stares off, contemplating life and the universe.*

ANYWAY!!! READ IT, DON'T READ IT...IF YOU DO READ IT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!  SYWAR OUT!!