Andie_AmericanPsycho

*Clears throat* Let me just say...I LOVE THIS IDEA!!

GAHD!! It's so cute, and whimsical I want to kiss this author on the cheek...*hrm* that being said, I will ten times more in this persons face lmao.

{Summary: Lisa is a junior in high school with a huge crush on a senior in her creative writing class, Leo. She writes a letter and puts in his desk, only for one problem to arise... Leo's fourth hour class just got their seats changed and someone else gets the letter.}

[Question, should I start putting up the summaries on all my reviews? Would you guys prefer that?]

Chapter 1:

CUUUTE!...yuck. LOL, I like the beginning, it makes me want to continue to the next chapter. There isn't anything really wrong with it, but if there was a scene of her hiding the letter and leaving the room, especially if you made her escape comical...maybe would hold down more readers.

Chapter 2

TOOO SHORT!!! I need walking hallway scenes, comical aspying of each other. Unless, this story will be entirely in letter format, but I,no, YOU need longer chapters....we need other characters and so on...cute only gets you so far.

Chapter 3

All I can say is that you SURELY, REALLY have something here, but because of the shortness of chapters I am sorta disappointed...this could be so much more fun to read, if there was more. I mean this might as well be labeled a SHOUJO it's like those pink fluffy mangas. And I'm sad because you definitely have the ability to write more, and definitely expand on this story and introduce other quirky characters.

ALL IN ALL I TRULLY WISHED THIS WRITER WROTE LONGER CHAPTERS, IT'S OKAY FOR IT TO BE SHORT, BUT I FEEL LIKE SHE HAS AN OPPORTUNITY TO MAKE SOMETHING GREAT HERE AND LIMITED SCENES ARE HOLDING HER BACK.

DEAR STRANGER! GO CHECK IT OUT, THERE SURELY NEEDS TO BE MORE!\

NOW, AUTHOR IS YOU, YOURSELF WANT ME TO WRITE A LONGER REVIEW, i WILL DEMAND KEKEKE THAT YOU REWRITE CHAPTER ONE, AND MAKE IT LONGER...FOR MY PERSONAL ENJOYMENT. I 1200 WORDS...LOL THAT IS MY CHALLENGE FOR YOU.