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Yolo, it's been a minute but here we are with our next round of SYWARS!!!

This girls asked me, I believe a few weeks back, she wanted a review for her story. I was all lke suuu~~re, and then life happened. Le'sigh...

Here we go!!!

I can't hold back anymore~~~ dum duuum duun lol, song stuck in my head.

So the first few lines, drag us along the EMO thoughts of the main character. I've always wondered this, but why can't black girls get in relationships in high school, without being antisocial...? Is it an attempt to be more like the whiter main stream teen fiction, where the character is lonely, or a loner? HMM.

So~~all her friends left her to become super popular drug addicts? I honestly don't like this, because it is a story with the main character being black, I would have preferred it having been time, and the natural change of growing older, and apart. It would also have delved a little more into her own personality, making you wonder why she didn't change.

HAH! Her name last name is King AWESOME!!

WHY?! Is she being rude to her teacher, after she spent so much time whining about being alone? One would think she'd be happy to have someone be friendly towards her. If I was her teacher I wouldn't have wasted my time, boo bye I got checks to collect.

I love her, "I'm better than everyone else, but waagh I want friends attitude." (Smell the burning sarcasm)

Followed by the heart thumping, and mouth dropping entrance of the antagonist, who will sweep our fair heroine off her feet.

Why exactly does race matter? Fine, is FIIANE!! I want to live in a building filled with the hottest men from every race...can this be made possible? Hello, anyone?

You better be grateful to loud, stevens. We need boos name.

....this sentence kind of felt repeated, I thank god for my complexion. That basically explained the idea, due to the fact the blush couldn't be seen. Was hand feedingI the audience, let us figure it out.

Lol, I enjoyed the tiffany line, it's funny. How I feel about gorgeous girls on a normal bases.

NAPPY!!....B*** Hold my purse! I wish a trick would say that to my face, bruh...bruuuuuh.

Tsk, tsk Courtney girl,, lay them hand on her ...let's have a moment of quiet to mourn Tiffany's face.

...she's smart: check. (She was sooo showing off for mister hotty.

No. no. he's from imagination land.

"Maybe she is bi-polar." Hon, I think so too.

I seriously applaud her for the male's view, it's not too centered on Victoria, and it's dynamic. I often find that some female writers can't fully switch over to a males personal view on something, but with this she has proven her skills are really legit. WELL DONE!!

In imagination land, god loves to leave hot boys under little girl's trees when they are good, he'll even give them a brain.

YEAS! She has an interesting home life, Foster parent who isn't abusing her. Awesome I love this, and yeah I love this.

Hating you're boss, will never, never ever stop happening!!

Any reason...but he went for the ugly jumper lol

OKAY!! Here we are at the end!

I hate to admit it, but aside from my stinging sarcasm this story is good. It made me smile, and chuckle which of course since I AM evil incarnate, hurt a little. I've no use for giggling, and snorting.

To be honest I had attempted to read this story, a while ago, on my own. As I a chronic Type 1 reader. So I am happy I was able to read it. I enjoyed, and it was refreshing don't let my earlier opinions keep you from reading COCONUT...ENJOY IT, AND LOVE IT!

SYWAR OUT!!