AinslieMaconachie

I have been doing EVERYTHING but reviewing...it's been a tough few weeks, but we're or more I'm back on track.

Okay, so this girl asked for a review waaaa~Y back, and I feel bad so I'm going to read, and write at the same time, also this is in the beginnings, so it's two chapters. ( won't lie makes it easier one me *wink*)

I liked that the opening involves an inner monologue NOT about boys, even though it will be a romance, it's nice that character doesn't seemed to be focused on that. It's more realistic, honestly gives the story more of an adultier edge...yea, yeas it's my own invented word.

LOL, she's only 17 so I'll forgive the "love driving" Because once she reaches twenty, she'll be like "can someone else drive?"

She's focused, and the other girls are just playing a sport in school...she's really different I enjoy immeasurably.

The way she'd separated the lines, and paragraphs makes it easier to read. I hate it when everything is squashes together in block paragraphs it makes it soooo tiring to read, >.< NO, SQUASHY WORDS!!

WOW!! Okay, so this girl has wa~~Y more going on, I like that!!

Normally by the second chapter, we've met the supposed prince charming, and we're already watching the a.k.a damsel in distress fall for him. But we are still focused on miss's hockey girl, and lord if she isn't having some interesting issues. (I mean injured athlete is little bit cliché, for a story transition, but---BUT!!! It's the first it's been used for a girl, or at least I've read it, and I—*cringe* like it.)

Now she angry, and resentful...I get it, I would be to if my finger didn't work.

Soo~~~if I didn't know any better, I have a feeling I know where this is going~~~~>><<< kekeke

Buuu~~T I won't be ruining it for anybody, sooo lets be getting on with this.

This story, definitely has more real aspect to it, and I enjoyed the strong female character. The writer as managed to create one, and I hope she sticks to this character's traits. This story is perfect, for young girls who are interested in feminist like romance. Not at all about some helpless damsel.

AS ALWAYS~~~! Should you only take my opinion...NO, DON'T YOU DARE!! This story is only 2 chapter in, and it wasn't so bad in the grammar or voice margins...so enjoy it!! I demand it.

GOAL (A #JUSTWRITEIT book) its good.