While,I was free writing a story,I came up with this new story idea to share with you guys.

So,here's a sneak peak at a story I'm planning to make but not sure it's a good Idea.

The idea is that after John Dory finds a sickly troll in the forest,who gives him her egg to take care of as her last wish before her death,and 16 years later,that same baby troll now grown up was getting banished to the forest for being too bad and causing too much chaos.

Got the child banishing part from the season 2 episode,"Bad Sandy",from Dawn Of The Croods.

Enjoy the sneak peak,guys!
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He must've been so stuck in his own thoughts that he didn't realize that Rhonda was close to something until Rhonda stopped herself abruptly.

"What is it,girl?"John Dory asked as he stepped out to see what was wrong.

Rhonda simply gurgled a response to him. John Dory looked around until he saw a figure laying on the ground,slowly coming over to it to get a better look at it.

It was another troll!

What was another troll doing out here,alone in the forest?

So he shook the troll gently to see if it or much rather she would wake up."Hello?"John Dory whispered to the troll before checking her pulse to make sure she was still alive.

She was still alive,but barely,though. Her pulse was slow,just like her breathing. John Dory kind of jumped back when the troll slowly opened her eyes a little.
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Tell me if it's a good idea or not,I want to know!