JUDGE : chloesmith0987
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Book 1: A Luring Darkness by iworshipbangtan

Title : 5
Cover : 3
Blurb : 3
Main Plot : 10
Grammar, Vocab, Pacing : 20
Emotions : 9
Ending : 5
Enjoyment : 10
Total : 65

Review : The overall aura of the book itself is quite intriguing and has that scent of suspense one cant resist. I was impressed by your choice was vocabulary and couldn't point out even a single grammatical error. The cover, however needs to be improved as a book as great as yours deserves an eye pleaser. Also, the blurb needs to be a bit more descriptive and suspenseful. A wonderful book for enjoyment and for those who want to quench their thirst for reading. The only suggestion I can give is to read as many books as possible for improvement of the blurb. As for the cover, you can simply order it at a cover shop. Once again, an excellent piece of paradise was presented by you which I deeply cherish. Good Luck for the Awards.

Book 2: Never Let Go by Nefelibatas_world

Title: 5
Cover : 5
Blurb : 5
Main Plot : 7
Grammar, Vocab, Pacing : 18
Emotions : 10
Ending : 4
Enjoyment: 8
Total : 62

Review : The blurb was the main cause of my attraction for the story. It was overflowing with emotions and is a plethora of mysterious yet touching dialogues. The blurb is undoubtedly one of the best I've cone across on wattpad. The book cover and title are quite appropriate and thoughtful. The dialogues were magic, carrying an invisible strength in them that can be felt by the readers, it touches us. I think you could improve your book by reading more and more. Also you should consult thesauruses for enhanced vocabulary. Other than that, your book was a bliss that I was fortunate to come across. Good Luck for the Awards!

Book 3: Marking The Highlight BlazetheAshes

Title : 4
Cover : 3
Blurb : 5
Main Plot : 8
Grammar, Vocab, Pacing : 17
Emotions : 9
Ending : 4
Enjoyment : 8
Total : 58

Review : Your book was interesting and I enjoyed it alot. The charcters portrayed their roles perfectly and the plot was good too. I think you need to work on the book title, make it more unique, more intriguing. Also, the book cover needs to be improved. For that, you can simply order it at a cover shop. Your book needs more enhanced vocabulary and for that you can use a thesaurus and increase reading. Also, you can use new vocabulary words in your daily life. Another trick to Improve vocabulary is to NOT use the same word twice. Your book blurb was amazing and really pulled me towards it. Well done and Good Luck for the Awards!

Book 4: Dark Paradise by idyllickook

Cover : 4
Title : 5
Blurb : 5
Main Plot : 10
Grammar, Vocab, Pacing : 20
Emotions : 7
Ending : 5
Enjoyment : 10
Total : 66

Review : One look at your Book is enough to force the readers into giving it a chance. The Blurb was very well written and the plot is unique. The mysterious aura that lingers across each chapter, each word, each scene gives the book a new sense of originality that makes it more like reality and less like a Fanfiction. Your cover needs to be more attractive and for that you can order it at a cover shop and you need to add more emotions in the book. Other than that the book was PERFECT. Good Luck for the Awards!

JUDGE : BrownieGirl1106
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Book 1: The Other side of the heaven by YoonminSlaysus

Cover: 5/5
Title: 4/5

Blurb/Description: 4/5
Main Plot: 9/10
Grammar, Vocabulary, Pacing: 16/20 Emotions: 9/10
Ending/The Last Chapter: 4/5 Enjoyment: 9/10
TOTAL: 60/70

Final Comments: This was a very enjoyable book you wrote! Firstly, I loved your way of narrating the story with the words you choose and the way you choose to showcase them. The prologue was amazing and definitely sets the mood as well as makes it very tempting to continue reading the book. However, I do think that your use of punctuation was a bit off. Nevertheless, great book!

Book 2: With The First Kiss by Diddlfanaat

Cover: 3/5
Title: 3/5
Blurb/Description: 2/5
Main Plot: 7/10
Grammar, Vocabulary, Pacing: 16/20 Emotions: 7/10
Ending/The Last Chapter: 3/5 Enjoyment: 7/10
TOTAL: 48/70

Final Comments: Wow, your way of describing is amazing and super detailed. However, sometimes it is a bit too detailed that it becomes unnecessary. But, you have added a little something to the typical "soulmate" plot, which is why I did give you a high mark for that. Also, I did enjoy your way of writing this - specifically the structure of the paragraphs. They weren't too big nor too small. An amazing book!

Book 3: Symbols of Magic by hogwartsjunior

Cover: 3/5
Title: 4/5
Blurb/Description: 3/5
Main Plot: 8/10
Grammar, Vocabulary, Pacing: 17/20 Emotions: 9/10
Ending/The Last Chapter: 4/5 Enjoyment: 8/10
TOTAL: 56/70

Final Comments: This book was just amazing! It took me on a whole roller coaster of emotions haha. In terms of your cover, it is unique, but it is quite hard to see the title. And I did think your description was a bit bland, but your writing style was amazing! Every now and then you had some grammar mistakes but they were small ones. Great book you have written!

Book 4: Will we Survive? by BinibiningJuana3

Cover: 4/5
Title: 4/5
Blurb/Description: 3/5
Main Plot: 6/10
Grammar, Vocabulary, Pacing: 14/20 Emotions: 7/10
Ending/The Last Chapter: 4/5 Enjoyment: 7/10
TOTAL: 49/70

Final Comments: I loved the cover you used as well as the title of this book. I thought it was very fitting. The way this story was structured was a bit hard to follow, but the emotions portrayed in your chapters (especially the last one) was amazing and definitely put me through a roller coaster! Although your description was appropriate for your story, I did think it lacked a bit of creativity. But overall, good book!

JUDGE : TashfeaTashfea
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Book 1: ASHES ; Assemble by minsuga4evr

Title: 5/10

Book cover - 7/10
The cover wasn't very eye catching but it was clear enough to see the name and Author name.

Blurb - 9/10
The blurb wasn't very catching either but it was enough to describe the summary. It's was a bit too long for the amount of informations it held.

Main plot - 8/10

Grammer/vocabulary - 7/10

Ending - 4/5

Enjoyment - 8/10
The book was ok , some parts can be detailed! The plot is creative and it has an interesting starting!! Also the chapters are really maintained and the author has a done a great job in editing.

Total: 50/70

Book 2: Not Today: Save by LorindaBoaitey

Title: 7/10

Cover : 7/10
The over wasn't very appealing. But the name and author name was clear to see.

Blurb : 7/10
The blurb was short but on point tho not very interesting to drag anyone to read the whole.

Plot : 8/10 The plot wasn't the best but the author could do better with the same plot.

Grammar / Vocabulary / Pacing : 6/10 Few paragraphs were way to long. I found some spelling mistakes too. The book repeated the same words quite a few time when there could be used more words. Three were a few time I found 'what' instead of 'how'.

Emotions : 4/10 The emotions were little to none.

Ending : 3/5 It hasn't ended yet so....

Enjoyment : 4
The enjoyment was little to none.

Total: 46/70

Book 3: Infinite Stars by maplecornia_092003

Title: 9/10

Cover : 9/10
The cover was beautiful, it intrigued me. The author name was a bit tough to read from the cover but the book name could be read easily.

Blurb : 7/10
I wouldn't say it was too long but it was long compared to the amount of information it gave. The blurb was rather obscure.

Plot : 7 /10
The plot is kinda cliche because of the fan-idol story but it's just a part of it as the whole story is unique.

Grammar/ Vocabulary/ Pace : 10/10
The story is progressing a little slowly compared to all the stories I have read. The author has farely vast vocabulary, I didn't find the book having a words getting repeated to a noticeable extend. I haven't been able to find any grammar mistakes, not even a spelling mistake.

Emotions : 7/10
This book made me feel every emotions but didn't make me laugh. This book made my heart clench from the protagonist's pain, made me nervous for their nervous moments but it didn't make me laugh and I believe laughter or comedy is a very important component to a book.

Ending : 3/5
The story has 27 chapters but the ending is indefinite. I couldn't expect or think of one.

Enjoyment : 7/10
The story mostly enjoyable but some parts have been deadly boring. The first chapter was so boring I felt to skip... The story got interesting once I hit the 7th chapter discluding intro , disclaimer etc. Good chemistry between the main leads.

Total: 52/70

Book 4: Map Of The Cell : 7 by Vionre

Title: 8/10

Cover : 7/10
The cover wasn't very bad but it didn't intrigued me into the book. The cover made me thing it was boring but the chapters were actually interesting. The title didn't pop out, I had to look for it to see it. The author name wasn't very clear to see, it didn't even pop out as much as the title.

Blurb : 7/10
The whole blurb was short but it did gave me the basic idea of what the book maybe be about . The whole blurb was boring but only the last line of the blurb made me interested to read it but that too was short.

Plot : 9/10
The plot is simple but the story follows it is well written but something tells me its gonna complicated in the long run. Unique to me since I never found anything like it before. I The comedy here us worth reading.

Grammar/ Vocabulary/Pacing : 9/10
The grammar was good. I didn't find grammatical or punctuation mistakes except the one mistake in chapter four, 'My name in Kim Namjoon'. The paragraphs were not too long or too shot just, just right. Something I find very annoying is when an author uses the same words again and again specially when they have other words options but I didn't face it in this story.

Emotions : 8/10
The humor part really made me laugh. And certain part made me smile wide but I didn't find any other emotions.

Ending : 4/5
Since its an unfinished book so I can't comment about the ending but all I can say is I read 10 chapter and I couldn't predict the ending which I can with other stories.

Enjoyment : 9/10
I started reading it just as a Judge / reviewer and because of the cover and the blurb I thought it would be really boring but when I started reading I didn't get up even once and finished it all because I wanted to know more about the story. I enjoyed a lot of parts.

Total: 61/70