JUDGE : eightearnity
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Book 1: Creatures of Darkness by symraSTB

(Before anything, I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading your book. This review is just honest judging and I hope it doesn't offend you.)

Cover- 5/5
The cover's great!

Title- 5/5
It's perfectly apt for the story.

Blurb- 4.5/5
The description is impressive, intriguing the readers about the story.

Main plot- 10/10
I have read many stories with supernatural plots, but this was truly the most unique. I am really enjoying it!

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation, pacing- 16/20
The pacing of the story is perfect! The paragraphs are written in perfect lengths and everything's going right.
Although the punctuation could be better. There isn't a need for so many ellipses (the '...'). You can use a comma or semicolon in many places. There were quite a few spelling errors as well. In few paragraphs, it could be ignored, but in a few places, it changes the meaning of the sentence. For example, in Chapter 3, 'mare' should be 'mere'. In chapter 4, 'things' should be 'thinks'.
Also, there were a lot of sentences where few words were missing. In many sentences, words can be added and as well as removed, which wouldn't change the meaning of the sentence.
The writing was nice and understandable to read. Although, few sentences could be rephrased.

Emotions- 8.5/10
I could feel the teenage love Heeyoung feels and Hoseok's protectiveness over his sister. Although I feel that the expression of emotions can be better.

Ending- 4.5/5
The book hasn't ended, but the most recent chapter is interesting to keep me on my toes for the next update!

Enjoyment- 9.5/10
I personally enjoyed this book a lot, not just as a judge but as a reader as well! I'm definitely gonna continue reading it.

The plot is definitely unique and interesting. I am genuinely enjoying the story and looking forward to it. What could be better was sentence structuring with effective vocabulary and better punctuations.

TOTAL - 63/70

Book 2: I Run by aleena992

Cover- 4.5/5
The cover's nice, but it could be a bit brighter (the brightness, not the theme).

Title- 4.5/5
It's suitable for the story.

Blurb- 5/5
The description is impressive, intriguing the readers about the story. If I had stumbled around the book, then the description would surely make me click the 'read' button.

Main plot- 9/10
I have read a similar story, but yours is definitely creative. The plot is really interesting and I was immersed in the story till the last chapter.

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation, pacing- 19.5/20
The writing is immaculate! I didn't find any grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors. The pacing of the story is perfect as well. The paragraphs are written in perfect lengths. The vocabulary is simple, splendid, and understandable. Your writing is simply flawless.

Emotions- 10/10
I felt every emotion closely; whether it was that of characters or what the majority of the readers would feel. The anger, frustration, joy, desperation, the heartwarming feeling; literally everything was felt and enjoyed.

Ending- 5/5
The ending wasn't exactly what I was expecting, and that makes it all the way better. The ending was simply perfect. It gave an important message as well.

Enjoyment- 10/10
I genuinely enjoyed this book, not just as a judge but as a reader as well! I'm sure I'm going to reread this book again and again.

The plot is definitely creative and interesting. The writing, the plot, the characters; almost everything is just perfect. It has already become one of my favorites.

TOTAL - 67.5/70

Book 3: Miss You The Most by Taekookie_mochi

(Before anything, I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading your book. This review is just honest judging and I hope it doesn't offend you)

Cover- 4/5
The cover's nice, it reflects the longing Hoseok feels. But the title's font is a bit small. It can be bigger.

Title- 4/5
It's suitable for the story. Although the word 'most' made me feel that there is more than one character who the OC misses. I feel the title can be better.

Blurb- 3.5/5
The description's nice, but it's really short. It does give an idea about the story, but it can be slightly more descriptive.

Main Plot- 8/10
I have read stories with similar plots. But you had written yours beautifully. Although certain parts did confuse me. For example, how did Hoseok know he was leaving in 10 days? I feel the story could've been clearer.

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation, pacing- 17.5/20
Your writing's beautiful. I didn't find many grammar mistakes. I couldn't judge much in this section since the book is written in the form of short letters.

Emotions- 8.5/10
I definitely felt Hoseok's love and longing for Haewon. Although a few things did confuse me.

Ending- 3.5/5
I was honestly expecting this ending, but nonetheless, your writing made it beautiful.

Enjoyment- 8/10
I enjoyed this book, not just as a judge but as a reader as well. Few words and sentences really made me feel so many things. Although I feel the story could've been more descriptive, so it would've been easier to understand it. The book was written beautifully. Certain lines touched my heart. But I feel the story can be more elaborative.

Total - 57/70

Book 4: Tomorrow by AgustDs_Shadow

(Before anything, I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading your book. This review is just honest judging and I hope it doesn't offend you)

Cover- 4.5/5
The cover's nice, giving an idea about the story. Although I feel it can be more attractive.

Title- 5/5
Perfectly apt for the story.

Blurb- 5/5
It's really intriguing. Doesn't reveals much but still gives a perfect idea about the story.

Main Plot- 10/10
It's really creative and unique. I have never read a story with a plot like this.

Grammar, vocabulary, punctuation, pacing- 18.5/20
There were a few mistakes here and there, such as tenses, but I didn't find anything major. The pacing of the story was perfect, it didn't feel too fast or too slow. The vocabulary was nice as well. The writing was understandable and enjoyable to read.

Emotions- 9/10
I could feel every single emotion, that too from the very beginning of the book (my heart's still aching by just thinking about the separation scene between Clem and her mum). But I feel it can be slightly better.

Ending- 4.5/5
The last chapter was interesting. Although I can't say much since the book is discontinued.

Enjoyment- 9.5/10
I genuinely enjoyed this book. The plot's interesting and if you ever decide to continue the book, then I'm surely going to read. This book was really unique and intriguing. The writing, the plot, the characters; almost everything is just perfect. I genuinely enjoyed this book, not just as a judge but as a reader as well. I respect your decision of not continuing the book, although a small part of me can't help hoping and waiting for know the entire story (the actual end).

TOTAL - 66/10

Book 5: One Last Time by Be_Savage_Dolls

(Before anything, I would like to say that I really enjoyed reading your book. This review is just honest judging and I hope it doesn't offend you)

Cover- 4.5/5
The edits are really beautiful and so is the cover. What could be better was the positioning of the title and usernames

Title- 4.5/5
The title's suitable for the story.

Blurb- 3/5
It gives an idea about the story, but it can be better. There's no need for so many ellipses (the '...'), and even if you're using ellipses, it should be a maximum of three dots (with few exceptions where there are four dots).

Main Plot- 7/10
I have read a plot like this in various places. Nonetheless, the writing didn't make it sound boring and it was nice to read.

Grammar, Vocabulary, and Pacing- 16/20
This part is what I feel the book can be better at. Some of the descriptions are really beautiful, touching the heart. But some seem a bit awkward and I have to read it a few times to understand it. The story was at a slightly fast pace. But it didn't feel awkward, since the reason behind everything was understandable. There were a lot of places where punctuation marks, especially commas, should be there. Instead of ellipses, you can use a comma, semicolon, or hyphen. Also, it's better to use a period/full stop at the end of the sentence instead of three dots. The paragraph lengths were perfectly right, neither too short, nor too long. Few sentences were breathtakingly beautiful, but there were many sentences that could be rephrased in a better and clearer manner. The vocabulary can be richer as well.

Emotions- 9/10
I really felt all the emotions; love, longing, pain, despair, etc. But as I said, few sentences could be rephrased to make things more clear.

Ending- 4.5/5
I was expecting this ending, although the writing made it extremely beautiful. Even though the ending was sad, it was perfect and realistic. The last chapter made me feel a lot of things.

Enjoyment- 7.5/10 The book was really beautiful. There were certain paragraphs (the descriptions of cherry blossoms) which I will surely reread. Although if I see the book as a whole, then I believe there are many places and sentences which could be improvised to make the book better and more beautiful.

I enjoyed reading the book. Certain paragraphs have my heart (the beautiful descriptions about the surroundings and a few lines about fate and life). The story is really beautiful. I feel that improvising certain areas and replacing certain words would make the book all the way better.

TOTAL - 56/70

JUDGE: SY7UN6YO0
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Book 1: Black Mamba by Tenebris_Spell

Cover:- 3/5
The cover wasn't that fascinating and it seemed little dull. It wasn't that alluring which is why it isn't attracting people much. The cover looks good for the plot but it can be better.

Book Title :- 4/5
The title didn't give me a new vibe but it did make me curious about the plot. I think it is fit for the plot.

Description:- 4/5
The description is a little confusing but it did point out the plot a little. It made me more curious about the book.

Main Plot :- 8/10
The plot was quite unique and intimidating. It was a little confusing at first hut it will sort out the doubts timely. The plot was quite creative since I haven't read many books about it. It was a little boring though.

Grammer :- 19/ 20
The Grammer and vocabulary was well written and I think she can improve a little more. There are few mistakes. The story had a stable process as per my perspective in a normal way. It was a little disrupted cause of the format. The author used rich words which may confuse the readers but it was well written.

Emotions :- 10/10
There are quite few people who can relate with the emotions the author wanted to tell us from the story. For me it felt a little intimidating at first but it made me feel some new emotions. I felt a lot many feeling which I can't even explain.

The ending:- 8/10
Well I didn't like the ending much till now since it's still ongoing. I feel the author was quite inspired by " I need u " and " Blood Sweat and Tears by BTS. It gave me some similar vibes to it. I think the authour is stuck in what to write as a ending.

Enjoyment:- 8/10
I enjoyed reading the book cause of it's plot. Well I have to say I was reading as a judge since I'm already in soo much of stress. I cried a little bit... The emotions played really well with me.

TOTAL - 64/70

Review:- The plot was really unique and I loved it. I was a little taken aback when I read the description cause my first impression towards this book was a horror vibe.... but I really appreciate your efforts. It was a unique plot but a little boring. I think you can make some changes with the cover cause it was a little dull. Overall it was really good. I liked it. Great Job !

Book 2: Let me love you by Jsturhope

Cover ( 4/5 )

Book Title ( 5/5 )

Blurb ( 3/5 )

Main Plot ( 8/10 )

Grammer/Vocabulary/Pacing (17/20)

Emotions ( 9/10 )

Ending ( 5/5 )

Enjoyment ( 8/10 )

TOTAL - 59/70

Reviews - Really liked the book a lot. It had a very unique plot and I have never felt this kinda of vibes in any other book. I would've marked it as perfect if the writer wrote in the perfect structure. But the plot was good enough to steal my heart, even though j get confused many times but it was good.

Book 3: Apollo's Possesions by amazyn_jae

Cover ( 4/5 )

Book Title ( 5/5 )

Blurb ( 3/5 )

Main Plot ( 9/10 )

Grammer/Vocabulary/Pacing (17/20)

Emotions ( 7/10 )

Ending ( 4/5 )

Enjoyment ( 8/10 )

TOTAL : 57/100

Reviews - Truthfully saying, I wasn't a big fan of the cover. It looked too vintage and historic for me. The overall story was good. I would recommend you to add a bit more vocabulary.
There are quite few parts that went over my head I dunno why. It was good but there are places it can improve. Btw, I liked yours story. Keep going on~

Book 4: Robin Hood by knjmonostar

Cover ( 5/5 )

Book Title ( 4/5 )

Blurb ( 3/5 )

Main Plot ( 7/10 )

Grammer/Vocabulary/Pacing (17/20)

Emotions ( 9/10 )

Ending ( 4/5 )

Enjoyment ( 7/10 )

TOTAL - 56/70

Reviews - Well, there are points to improve. The plot was good but there could have been few more things to be taken care of such as the writing techniques and usage of more grammatical words. The story is still on going so I am a little anxious of what is going to happen next. But overall, it was good for me. The chapter were longggg...like I haven't read any stories which this long chapters yet. But I think It was a good trick from the writer so she/he can take a little more time to update on the other chapters.