I know the title is quit weird,but first time I am trying to write an one shot on song. I know you guys have read a lot of One Shots on Hindi and English songs.but did you ever tried Bengali? no?

Then try it...

Before start the story here riansh are from middle class family and both are in relationship from 5 years.

Start-
           (basically it will be a phone call conversation)
          V- Hello, Riddhima can you hear me?I want to discuss something very important.
         
          R- Yeah! tell.

          V- You know your dad denies my marriage proposal as I was jobless. But 2 days ago I got a job where can get 5000?/- salaries and now nobody can stop us.Now you can deny for the proposals .Tell your mom you don't want to marry.

           R(in a very low audio,which don't reach him)- oo, really that's great. 

           V- why you are silent sweetheart ? what's wrong with you ? did your father said something to you?please tell me.

Chakrita ami pey gechi bela shuncho,
akhon ar keu atkate parbe na
s_____ndhota ei-bar tumi veste dite paro,
make bole dao biye tumi korcho na (2)

Chakrita ami pey gechi bela shotti,
ar matro koyekta mash bas
Starting-ei ora 1100 debe, teen mash pore confirm,
chup kore kano bela kichu bolcho na

                                                                 (I have got a job Bela, are you listening?
                                                                               No one can stop us now.
                                                                                     You can send back that proposal
                                                                                  and tell mother you are not marrying.
                                                                         I have indeed got a job.
                                                                           Just a few more months (of wait)
                                                                                     They will pay 1100 now,
                                                                               Confirm the job after three months...
                                                                      Bela, why are you silent, why don't you say something?)

There was pin drop silence for 10 minutes after this she can't control her emotions .She started sobbing like some one snatched some thing really precious from her.  

                        V- Is this Riddhima bose's number 2441139? can you hear me?

                        R(while sobbing lightly)- yes

                         V- No no, this time I can not lost.After trying 10-12 wrong numbers I got u.I got u after so many difficulties .I can not lost I have to win for you, me most importantly for us.

Eta ki 2 44 11 39,
bela bose tumi parcho ki shunte
10-12 bar wrong number | periye tomake peychi,
debo na kisu tei ar harate

(Hello... 'Is that 2441139?'
Bela Bose are you listening?
I have got you after a dozen wrong numbers
I will not lose you now at any cost...)

T

hen suddenly some  one snached the landline from her hand.And it was her dad. He Tightly slaps her on the cheeks.
Started shouting on her.

   V- Hello! Hello! can you hear me?
                                 Please I beg you,give the phone to riddhima. Please...........metar is increasing It is becoming difficult for me.It is really ! really very urgent ,very important.
                

Halo, 2 44 11 39,

din na deke bela-ke ektibar
Meter jacche bere ei public telephone-e,
jaruri khub jaruri dorkar

(Hello... 2441139?'
Please call Bela Bose, just once.
Meter's running on this public telephone
this an important, very important matter...)

V- I will not let defeat our love ,our dreams of living  happily together.Our memories , spending time together in cheap road side resturants,dhaba.

We are waiting for the freedom from the very first day we met,we fall in love despite knowing our class , status  and the way of living.It is difficult to tell who fall in love first,who admire first or who first developed the feeling first.
It is difficult ,........very difficult.

But true love had to fessed a lot odds , thrones.  And Our love is just like that . You know the world which is full of black and white garbages , A city ............ facade of lies , betrayal, traitors and Back stabbers ,liers . There is situated a small , colourful world of love , true lovers , trust  which is our ........................
                                                                                           
                                                                                                   Yes! indeed it is ours .

                                                                                                   where just three people lives.......................
                                    
           You , me and our love. Beautiful ! right.

Shwapno ebar hoye jabe bela shatyi,
atodin dhore ato opeksha
Rasta-r kato shasta-hotele badhho-cabin-e bandi-dujone,
rudhwashwash kot-to pratiksha(2)

Ar kichudin tarpor bela mukti,
Kashba'r oi neel dewal-er ghar
Shada-kalo ei jonjal-e-bhora mitthe-kothar shohore,
tomar amar lal-neel shangshar
(chorus)

(This time our dreams will really come true
After all this long wait
We have spent many a days in dusty dingy cabins by the road
Waiting with heavy breaths...

Just a few more days Bela, then freedom.
That blue-walled house in Kasba (will be ours)
In this white-black, trouble-ridden, bitter-sweet city
(We will start) our colourful life...)

V- I truly get the job . Our bad days had gone ,
helllo     .......... are u listening me ?

chakrita ami pey gechi shatyi
Kannakatir jhagra jhatir shomoy gache periye,
Halo, tumi shunte pachho ki
 

                                                                                           
                                                                                                                (I have got a job indeed
                                                                                   Those times of sobs, of brawls are gone now
                                                                                               Hello... Can you hear me or not?)

V- Hey! sweetheart why are you crying ? please tell .
                                 This silence is killing me .

R- I am going to get married in 5 days.We failed vansh .............. We failed!
     But I will always love you , always....

                                   Saying she cut the call .

V- what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chup kore kano, eki, bela tumi kandcho,
chakrita ami pey gechi shatyi
Kannakatir holla hati shomoy gache periye,
Halo! tumi shunte pachho ki(2)

Halo/Dhur chai/hello,
2 44 11 39, 2 44 11 39,

(Bela, why are you crying silently?
I have indeed got a job
Those times of sobs and brawls are gone
Hello... Can you hear me?

Hello? **** Hello?
2441139, 2441139)

And after 5 days she got married.Yes! got married , they got separated. They both lost , failed.

I know after reading it you all are hell mad and angry on me . But trust me , this is the reality ...... a sad and bitter reality.
Because the riansh or vansh and riddhima of stories win the battles .But the riansh of the reality  or society failed ,lost the battles.

PS-(this is a real life story of Anjun dutta.And I feel Bela has accepted a proposal and is all set to marry...The call came too late. The song, for me, is an ode to young love in a middle-class Indian background that strives and strives to set things right.

I could write a lot more about this song.)

I think this is my biggest update .Pardon me for mistakes as it is my first time. Some in inline comments are expected.

This is for today .Well do you want a sequel or second part of this ? then comment .

thank you,

yours,

lazy writer.