BOOK TITLE: Fits And Spells.

REVIEWER: SinaMW1209

AUTHOR: christymahon

GENRE: Poetry

COVER: - 4.5/10 

Your cover is... very different, you could say but I don’t think it gives me the poetry vibes or attracts the readers. Your cover, personally looks like a mood board, and that’s not how it’s supposed to be like. Maybe, add some more colour into it; choose pictures which attracts the reader, symbolizes your word and also gives more poetry vibes. I think if you work on your cover, it could attract more and more readers.

PAGE LAYOUT: - 18/20

The page layout was very well-organized and understandable. Your stanzas were divided perfectly and everything looked very neat and organized. Good job!

ORIGINALITY: - 9/10

Your poems were so different from what I normally read. They were so- I don’t honestly have the right word to say about your poems. I felt as if I was transported into another era or time period, so, your poems definitely felt very original. I think the poems came deeply from your own imagination! 

TONE OF EXPRESSION: - 8/10

Can I please skip this? Lmao. I don’t know what to say, honestly. I think the tone applied to each of your poems were very well conveyed and everything was perfectly written. Expressing tones are particularly very important in poems, and you managed to do that. Great job!

DEPTH OF UNDERSTANDING/MEANING DERIVED: - 18.5/20

The meanings and stories behind your poems were very well conveyed through your beautiful words and writing style. Funny, I once thought that poetry was a joke but now I love it with all my heart. I guess back then I didn’t understand the true meaning behinds poems, but reading yours and other ones as well, made me realize that. Your meanings were understandable to the readers, although sometimes it took me a couple times to read again and again to understand since it’s a poetry with the old writing style. Nevertheless, it was great! 

MESSAGE DELIVERED: - 8/10

The messages or stories delivered through your poems were very deep, and it took me some time to understand the true meaning of some poems. Although I couldn’t understand the meaning of some poems, other readers definitely did and their reaction to it was very positive and great. I think the message delivered was perfectly conveyed to most readers and had a deep sensational story embroidered behind them. Good job! 

OVERALL IMPRESSION: - 19.5/20

I really enjoyed reading your poems. They were so different and unique from poems I normally read, and one reason was probably because they transported me to the past, or the to the old time period. You conveyed such deep emotions through your words, and your writing style was beautiful. True, there were times where I couldn’t understand anything but after a few attempts of trying to understand, I did. The flow of your words are spectacular, and all I’ve got to say is keep up the great work!

TOTAL: - 85.5/100

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