REVIEW 21
BOOK TITLE: Opposite Attracts
REVIEWER: SinaMW1209
AUTHOR: TJMaguire
GENRE: Fantasy/ Romance
COVER: - 9/10
I think the cover looks really lovely. The fonts and the colours are really pretty and eye-catching. We can also get a certain amount of information about your book from the cover and it attracts the readers a lot. Good job!
BOOK TITLE: - 7/10
The title is good... but it’s a bit too common. Many stories can be found on Wattpad itself with the same title. Therefore, I think it will be better to give your story a much more different name with a unique touch to it.
BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: - 8.5/10
The blurb and story description is quite good and captures the readers’ interest while reading it. It is well-written and has a proper number of words as well.
PAGE LAYOUT: - 10/10
The page layout was perfect! The paragraphs were well-organized and very near. Everything was also understandable to one’s eyes
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: - 9.5/10
The character development was brilliant! I especially loved Zamorra’s character because she was sassy and really funny. Luther was cool too, and a bit interesting, you could say. I think you did a great job conveying their emotions. Keep it up!
GRAMMAR/VOCABULARY/SPELLING: - 10/10
Grammar was perfect! Not a single mistake was spotted to me! Your word choice was also good and your sentences flowed properly in each chapter. There weren’t any spelling mistakes either so, 11/10!
COMMUNICATION WITH READERs: - 4/5
I have to say that you communicated with your readers in a brilliant manner. You replied to their comments kindly and I haven’t got much to say other than good job!
GENERAL SATISFACTION: - 15/15
I really enjoyed reading your story! Your book was definitely one great book! Your book made me laugh because of the humor added and other emotions too! You’ve done a great job writing this book, keep up the great work!
TOTAL: - 73/80
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