REVIEW 13
BOOK TITLE: Valence
REVIEWER: BrooklynWolves
AUTHOR : Aarya2103
GENRE : Fantasy/Thriller.
-COVER : 10/10
Your cover suits the book vary well and looks really cool like someone is going in or leaving the mirror.
-BOOK TITLE: 8/10
The title makes sense to the book after reading a few chapters. I liked the book title it was fun to say over and over in my head.
-BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 10/10
Brielle’s parents died in an unfortunate accident. While grieving for her parents, she was pulled by Ace into another dimension, a mirror dimension like a parallel world only to be told be told that her parents were alive but kidnapped by Brielle’s mirror replica, Ayra. Brielle only being able to shift worlds because she was valence.
This tells me about what your story is going to be about without giving away too much and was one of the first things that made me want to read it.
-PAGE LAYOUT (Paragraph, Spacing, Lines, Order Of Sequence, Neatness) : 10/10
Your page layout was realy good and nice to follow while reading the book, it wasn't messy or hard to read at all
-CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT : 10/10
I saw a lot of great character changes with your main character Brielle after her parents die and she gets taken to a magical mirror that you can travel through with her enemy Caleb. It makes me want to read more and find out how she changes at the end of the story.
-GRAMMAR/VOCABULARY/SPELLING: 9/10
For someone who’s the first language wasn't English your book only had a few spelling mistakes but nothing major other than that your book was really easy to read and follow.
-COMMUNICATION WITH READERS: 5/5
I can see that you like to be very engaging with your readers and you excel at replying to there comments in the book which is a really great thing to see.
-GENERAL SATISFACTION(Pleasure derived from reading the work): 14/15
I enjoyed this book a lot and I can't wait to see what happens in Brielle life and she sorta had to figure out what path she wants to take. She has to decide whether she wants to live the rest of her life without her parents or go into the mirror and stay there where she can be with both of her parents.
-TOTAL: 76/80
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